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    • mag
      mag Pro SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

      @Asyas_illos hi! I love the simple design and how the illustrations are displayed, they are big enough to see them properly and small enough to create a nicely looking gallery 🙂
      I would add some sequential art, since this is something most art directors are looking for.
      And I don’t know why, but when I click on the about page, it will not allow me to click back on the home page or contact page.
      Good luck, creating an online portfolio usually is a pain in the bee. I’m still working on mine, so… 😅

      Mag
      https://www.instagram.com/mag_takac/
      http://mag.takac.name

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        Asyas_illos @mag last edited by

        @mag it certainly is! I have really been struggling with it! Thanks for the feedback❤️

        Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
        www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
        https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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          Asyas_illos @Miriam last edited by Asyas_illos

          @Miriam thanks for the feedback on editing, I will look into it. I was hoping those darn things would be not be visible on the side I can’t for the life of me figure out how to delete the darn things so I tried just moving them as far off the page as I could lol 😂 well looks like I’ve got some more work to do…

          Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
          www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
          https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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            Asyas_illos last edited by

            @mag and yes the tabs are glitchy I don’t know why. If use the back button then choose again it will work but I don’t know what the deal is with that?!

            Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
            www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
            https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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              Asyas_illos @Miriam last edited by

              @Miriam if you have time can you please see if those images are still visible on the side of the page?

              Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
              www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
              https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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              • AngelinaKizz
                AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                @Asyas_illos I don’t see them anymore. Though I never noticed them the first time.

                www.evarartistry.com
                www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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                • Miriam
                  Miriam @Asyas_illos last edited by

                  @Asyas_illos Everything still looks the same. 😕
                  Good luck figuring it out!

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                  • AngelinaKizz
                    AngelinaKizz @Miriam last edited by

                    @Miriam not for me, maybe you need to refresh your browser history?

                    1861E358-93E7-4C8B-B3AE-4AA32A789A01.jpeg

                    www.evarartistry.com
                    www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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                      Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                      @AngelinaKizz @Miriam are you using a desktop computer or a mobile device?

                      Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                      www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                      https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                      • AngelinaKizz
                        AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                        @Asyas_illos in using the browser on my iPad.

                        www.evarartistry.com
                        www.Instagram.com/evarartistry/

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                          @AngelinaKizz ok I think it’s a desktop issue then cuz it doesn’t show for me either. So I found the way to delete it but unfortunately I need a key board lol. Looks like I’ll have to get the ole’ laptop out (long sigh)😂

                          Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                          www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                          https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                            LauraA SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by LauraA

                            @Asyas_illos Hi! Just wanted to say that I took the time to read through this entire thread yesterday and today and I am so impressed with how your work is shaping up. I noticed your work already on Critique Arena, but this just confirms my opinion. And you're so fast! I have done my candy house design for Hansel and Gretel three times.

                            About your website: I am on Safari and still see the half flower motif. But Safari doesn't always play well with others. Good luck with your site. Looks great so far, and I was going to recommend Squarespace, but I'm sorry it doesn't work with your iPad. Do you have access to a Creative Cloud portfolio site? That could work and be cleaner than the Wix one. Or maybe there's a way to get rid of the Six banner. Just a thought.

                            Cheers!

                            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/lauraintorino/
                            http://lauraaldersonart.com/

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                              Asyas_illos @LauraA last edited by

                              @LauraA thank you, and I love how your your Hansel and Gretel came out you have a very classic style, that I admire! Thanks for the heads up I guess I have to to dust off the laptop and try to fix it that way. Thanks for the feedback!

                              Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                              www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                              https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                              • Asyas_illos
                                Asyas_illos last edited by

                                Hello again! Thanks to those helping me to figure out my website, if anyone using a desktop computer could please check my homepage again to see if there are still remnants of any images left on the sides I’d be extremely grateful!!

                                Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                                www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                                https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                                  A Former User @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                  @Asyas_illos I'm using a desktop. Website looks good! Portfolio front and center. I missed most of the previous parts of this thread, but I don't see any issues on the sides. There's a white boarder around the images and whitespace on the sides.

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                                    Asyas_illos @Guest last edited by

                                    @Stephanie-H ok sounds good! Thanks Stephanie!

                                    Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                                    www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                                    https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                                    • Miriam
                                      Miriam @Asyas_illos last edited by Miriam

                                      @Asyas_illos I just took another look, and the images are not showing up on the sides anymore, so it looks good. 🙂

                                      But the links on the "About Me" page are still not working.

                                      (I am using Chrome on my laptop.)

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                                        Asyas_illos @Miriam last edited by

                                        @Miriam awesome thanks! Although I’m not sure what to do about the links🤷🏻‍♀️

                                        Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                                        www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                                        https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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                                          Miriam @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                          @Asyas_illos Can you try deleting them & putting them back in?

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                                            Asyas_illos @Miriam last edited by

                                            @Miriam not sure I want to try and mess with it more because it’s so finicky it was a template. I just replaced everything with my own stuff. It’s annoying but if you go back and refresh it works. It was such a pain use this, I have plans to upgrade after I use it for a bit.

                                            Asyasewardillos@gmail.com
                                            www.Instagram.com/asyas_illos/
                                            https://asyasewardillos.wixsite.com/mysite

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