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    Visualizing Drawing in Perspective

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      • Eliana Bastidas
        Eliana Bastidas last edited by

        Good to see you back 😁 !

        All the drawings look great a first glance, the only thing I could pick about on seeing them like this without checking are the circles and ears.
        I can't see consistency in the inner circle in shape, position and size. Also, because of the way you drew the shape that is below, it looks kind of flat in some drawings.
        About the ears, the position and size of some of them also looks off.

        Hope you find my eyes useful! 😂

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          A Former User @Eliana Bastidas last edited by

          @Eliana-Bastidas 😊 I'm happy to be back.

          Thank you for your feedback! It's very helpful. I will spend some time trying to figure out the ears and readjusting the circles.

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            These are looking great! The only thing I noticed is on the very first image. The circles on the inside of the tube (I think it's the seat area?) need to be dropped down a little to give the outside of the tube more depth. I tried to do a draw over but It's very rough because I was using my mouse on my computer! Maybe just play around with it a little. Hope it helps! And keep going! Perspective can be tough, but it makes things sooooo much easier in the long run! 1660736503034-l1.jpeg

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              A Former User @kirsten-mcg last edited by

              @kirsten-mcg Thank you so much! I appreciate you taking the time to draw over the image. I will try your edits on the original drawing.

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                  kirsten-mcg @Guest last edited by

                  @Stephanie-H Oh I see now! The faint contour lines you've added really help. This is the kind of thing that's hard to get across in a line drawing without shading. 😉Nice job on your re-working.

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