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    • AngelinaKizz
      AngelinaKizz @Guest last edited by

      @Stephanie-H since it was just something cute that my kids say… it really doesn’t have substance to the story. So I’m gonna scrap and think more! I haven’t really had a ton of focus this month and it’s showing.

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      • AngelinaKizz
        AngelinaKizz last edited by

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        How’s the story and composition here?

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        • Asyas_illos
          Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

          @AngelinaKizz I know I’m missing something I’m not sure what he’s using the cotton balls for. I see he’s injured and he may be in for more water than he’s getting.

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          • AngelinaKizz
            AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

            @Asyas_illos what I’m hoping to get across is him growing his own cloud to play in since he can’t fly.

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            • Johanna Kim
              Johanna Kim SVS OG @AngelinaKizz last edited by

              @AngelinaKizz I'm seeing a bird with a broken wing watering a pot of cotton balls. It seems to be trying to grow a cloud. Maybe it misses flying and being among the clouds, so it's growing some for itself? Composition seems fine, but the story is still a bit fuzzy I think.

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              • AngelinaKizz
                AngelinaKizz @Johanna Kim last edited by

                @Johanna-Kim thankyou! I need to figure out how to make it clearer that he wants to make his own cloud to play in since he can’t fly with his friends.

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                • Johanna Kim
                  Johanna Kim SVS OG @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                  @AngelinaKizz Sounds like my guess was very close. And now I see the birds above. At this rough stage, I hadn't noticed them among the clouds. Maybe the packaging for the cotton balls can also show birds? Then I think you idea would be crystal clear.

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                  • Asyas_illos
                    Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                    @AngelinaKizz maybe creating a sort of kite or mobile or cloud light? Could help with story? Have it hanging from the tree some how?

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                    • AngelinaKizz
                      AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                      @Asyas_illos I’m not sure I can envision it… I’m sorry…

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                      • Kiara Necessary
                        Kiara Necessary @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                        @AngelinaKizz maybe if you added a little garden tag in the pot with a silhouette of him playing on the ground with a cloud, as a sort of “after” image? 260FACEA-F192-4075-9DBD-DF3A5654E355.jpeg

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                        • Asyas_illos
                          Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                          @AngelinaKizz lol it’s ok

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                          • AngelinaKizz
                            AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                            @Asyas_illos I feel a bit brain fried (we’re in choas too) so it’s probably that and not you.

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                            • ArtMelC
                              ArtMelC @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                              @AngelinaKizz I think she meant having the homemade clouds hanging on strings like this type of toys? Because now to me I read it as the bird wanting to grow bean sprout because my kid came back from school with a bean sprout growing on pieces of wet cotton balls. Haha. Having the cotton balls hanging will clarify the "clouds" concept

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                                Asyas_illos @ArtMelC last edited by

                                @ArtMelC yes!

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                                  A Former User @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                  @AngelinaKizz Looks like you have an idea with a story going now. The story is cute.

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                                  • AngelinaKizz
                                    AngelinaKizz last edited by

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                                    • Asyas_illos
                                      Asyas_illos @AngelinaKizz last edited by

                                      @AngelinaKizz I really love the color palette you’re working in!

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                                      • AngelinaKizz
                                        AngelinaKizz @Asyas_illos last edited by

                                        @Asyas_illos thanks!!! I used a scrappy ink nib brush, that gets darker with every stroke.

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