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    Final Assignment - Basic Perspective Drawing

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    • MiaNova
      MiaNova @kirsten-mcg last edited by

      @kirsten-mcg whoa I didnโ€™t notice that LOL thank you!

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      • von_Nimmermehr
        von_Nimmermehr last edited by von_Nimmermehr

        i second what @kirsten-mcg
        it really looks good but the dresser and the bed are not standing against the wall. i would say both are minimum 40-50cm away from the wall if that would be real life. But you have your wall lines so you can quikly move both of it closer to wall ๐Ÿ™‚

        You could also move both furniture closer to the door to make it look smaller and cozier, but then you have to adjust the picture a little bit more.

        You can try it yourself and if you like i can share a quick draw over with you. ๐Ÿ™‚

        Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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        • MiaNova
          MiaNova @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

          @von_Nimmermehr Thank you so much! Here is a WIP I did based on your critiques ๐Ÿ™‚ I kinda just redrew everything to make things line up.
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          • kirsten-mcg
            kirsten-mcg @MiaNova last edited by

            @MiaNova I always need someone else to point out stuff like that to me in my own art! Something about being too close to it to notice things like that. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kirsten.mcgonigal.art/
            Portfolio Site: www.kirstenmcgonigalart.com

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            • von_Nimmermehr
              von_Nimmermehr last edited by

              @MiaNova it looks really good ๐Ÿ™‚

              Sometimes its just better to redo it. you made a good job also giving the dresser some feeds looks so much better ๐Ÿ™‚

              Website: www.von-Nimmermehr.com
              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/von_nimmermehr_illustration/

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                AbramHartrick last edited by

                It looks good, I love the texture you added into the rug.
                Correct me if I'm wrong, but it looks like the bed, compared to the door, may be a bit small. If you were to mvoe the bed into the distance so that it's right up against the door (following the perspective grid you've drawn out) the top of the bed posts would still be just below the doorknob. I'm not sure if that's intentional or not, just wanted to mention it. ๐Ÿ™‚

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                • MiaNova
                  MiaNova @von_Nimmermehr last edited by

                  @von_Nimmermehr Thank you! Youโ€™ve been such a good help ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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                  • MiaNova
                    MiaNova @AbramHartrick last edited by

                    @AbramHartrick Yes I did notice that something about the bed was bothering me. Thank you for pointing that out ๐Ÿ˜Š

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                    • blackhound rise
                      blackhound rise @MiaNova last edited by

                      @MiaNova that's great effort. i'm yet to start this assignment, so have decided to re-cap the entire course this week and give the final assignment a good crack start of next week. same time each night i will go over the assignment spec deciding what angle to work with.

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                        Bill B. @MiaNova last edited by

                        @MiaNova Also about the bed, the right bed knob on the head board should be at the same height since itโ€™s on the horizon line. If you move them above the horizon line to match the door knob height, then the R bed knob will be higher. I like the design of the bed.

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