Website launched! Critiques welcome

Kim Rosenlof

@ArtistErin I think your artwork looks great! I also agree with the others that you don't need that big image on top, just put it in the portfolio. I also feel like you don't need a home page AND an art page. I would just make your art page the home page so people who come to your site see it first thing. I think you should make it as easy as possible for people to find your art since that is why they are going there. I do like that you are including an about and contact page.

Charlotte Glaze

Good job getting a website.

Some thoughts: use your art page as the homepage. There's no reason for that front page. There's no content and people want the content right away or they may leave.

Your contact page background made it hard to read. I would make it look the same at the other pages.

I think your top banner image should be taken off, and the menu be at the top. It was hard to find the link to click when scrolling back up to the top after seeing the art.

I like your portfolio page, the subtle effects are pleasant, and your images are lovely.

Best of luck!

ArtistErin

@Mimi-Simon Wow thank you so much Mimi. This was so helpful. I made the adjustments, published now. The only thing is I bought the domain erinrichardsondesigns.com through Wix and am committed as far as I know, yet I figured if I could adjust my title to just my name on my front page will that be enough? I know brand recognition is super important.

Trying to not look like a blog, so in Wix I chose a template that looks like a gallery, and it has a feature that allows you to toggle to mobile view to see how it would look on a smartphone... So I had to choose how to set up from that vantage point as well. I guess as I learn more I'll keep tweaking. Not kidding I feel the trial and error process with this has been super educational.

I love your website! Your work is so good. I love how organized and streamlined you are as well, and I can see how your advice has really shown me what I had envisioned to begin with, so thank you...

Mimi Simon

@ArtistErin glad I could help! I just checked it out and it looks so improved! websites can be super complex and annoying so just try and fix what you can and without sinking in a ridiculous amount of time trying to fix one tiny thing (I am guilty of this and my website still has a few problems that I've just kinda given up on since i'm not a programmer lol)

ArtistErin

@Kim-Rosenlof Thank you Kim!! Yes totally agree! It is now much better! My main intention is to keep things super simple and let the work speak. Hoping to maintain this approach, adding better pieces as I get better...

Definitely planning to begin a contact strategy. I know LinkedIn is a way to do this as well as reaching out to artists with similar styles and finding out their methods. I would like to approach some pros to pay them for their time for a critique too.

ArtistErin

@Charlotte-Glaze Thank you! All you guys pretty much echoed the exact same thing LOL I love it. This process has been super crazy, I've been up since 3 am cause I couldn't sleep so I have to chill for awhile, let things ride! Hoping it all starts coming together soon though. Really want to get my LinkedIn Profile going soon.

On another sorta related note: my urgency now is felt more acutely, I suppose, because I'm back at work after taking the year off for surgeries so feeling a bit impatient. My time off is limited, and can't quit the day job until something comes in! Ugggh. The grind...

ArtistErin

@NessIllustration Interesting! I do see how it cleans up the art and looks more professional...

Jeremy Ross

Hi @kirsten-mcg, I ended up doing the same on my Kamari piece after the good advice here.

Jeremy Ross

Website looks great @ArtistErin! The improvements certainly helped!

ArtistErin

@Mimi-Simon Oh yeah you nailed that point totally. I have to make myself walk away often. I could fiddle with something forever! And I'm not a programmer either I'd rather be an artist, it's way more fun

ArtistErin

@Jeremy-Ross Thank you Jeremy!!

kirsten-mcg

@Jeremy-Ross glad I wasn't the only one!

kirsten-mcg

Your site looks great now @ArtistErin ! I think the changes you made really help, IT looks clean and professional and is easy to navigate. And you're not the only one to buy a domain name that isn't exactly right. I added "art" to my domain name after my name, and now it’s so long I'm kicking myself and wishing I had just used my name. But The address is really a Little thing I think. Most people just click on the link without thinking about it much!

Charlotte Glaze

Looks great, now! Good job!

Chantal Goetheer

@ArtistErin I only saw your new and improved site, but it looks great. Clean, simple and the works get all the attention they deserve. Great job!!

ArtistErin

@kirsten-mcg Thank you Kirsten! This means alot to me! I can tell, in fact, I know this is the stuff I was afraid of doing: making mistakes, looking like a fool or unprofessional which tends to sprout thoughts of imposter syndrome and perfectionism, which has stopped me in the past from getting out there. Risking looking amateurish, huge fear. But I tell myself now just do it anyway and I can change my mind, course correct, and don't worry so much.

My brother is a great photographer, and is helping me with my photos! Looking forward to this part. I feel good photography is important for branding...

Upward and Onward

ArtistErin

@Charlotte-Glaze Thank you Charlotte!!!

ArtistErin

@Chantal-Goetheer Thank you Chantal!!! Yeah it's been a learning curve! I can say with every ounce of myself it is so satisfying to do the thing I have been afraid of. Tackling fear head on seems to be my theme this year.

Talking to potential art directors, agents, employers... that's next

Chantal Goetheer

@ArtistErin You go girl!!

ArtistErin

@Chantal-Goetheer Thanks!!!! I'm working a full schedule along with squeezing in an hour or two before I have to go in to work. Not easy but worth it...
Slow and steady wins the race