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    Practical Perspective Assigment 2 : Farmhouse

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    • MiaNova
      MiaNova last edited by

      Hey everyone! I know it’s been a while since I posted here. I wanted to share the farmhouse I drew that I followed along with In @davidhohn ’s video. I would like some feedback on any mistakes I’ve made with it! 😊

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        A Former User @MiaNova last edited by

        @MiaNova your drawing follows the rules of 3-point perspective very well. To challenge yourself, try putting a circular window upstairs in the front.🙂 It will provide a bit of contrast to all the rectangular windows.

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        • davidhohn
          davidhohn SVS Instructor Pro @MiaNova last edited by

          @MiaNova Very nicely done!

          www.davidhohn.com
          www.instagram.com/davidhohnillo
          twitter.com/david_hohn

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          • MiaNova
            MiaNova @Guest last edited by

            @thomas-young ooo that is great idea! Thank you 😊

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            • MiaNova
              MiaNova @davidhohn last edited by

              @davidhohn thank you so much!! I enjoy learning from your videos 😀

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              • jahn
                jahn last edited by

                Hi! this is great! I actually thought it was a screenshot from a 3D modeling program at first lol
                The first and main thing that I noticed was the edge of the roof. They seemed too long on the backside, so I threw the perspective lines just to check. It's a little finicky but the only issue I saw. Hope it helps to see what I see!
                Screenshot 2024-06-01 at 9.11.09 PM.png

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                • MiaNova
                  MiaNova @jahn last edited by

                  @jahn Thank you so much!!! I appreciate the feedback 😊

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                  • Jim Algar
                    Jim Algar last edited by

                    At first glance I thought this was 3D so that's a good indicator, ha! Might not strictly be in the scope of the assignment, but to echo the suggested round window I'd consider putting in a couple of random elements near the base of the building like a couple of barrels etc. The shape would add more contast and be an additional challenge too.

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                      gwendolynium @MiaNova last edited by

                      @MiaNova The problem I see is that the vertical guidelines don't quite converge on a single point below, and the verticals in the drawing don't follow the guidelines. Here's a picture to show what I mean. If you adjust these, your drawing will look much more solid and believable. Good luck!
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                      • MiaNova
                        MiaNova @gwendolynium last edited by

                        @gwendolynium thank you so much!! I appreciate it, sorry I’m so late on this 😅

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                        • MiaNova
                          MiaNova @jahn last edited by

                          @jahn thank you so much!! ☺️

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