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Practical Perspective Assigment 2 : Farmhouse

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  • MiaNova
    MiaNova last edited by 28 May 2024, 16:19

    Hey everyone! I know it’s been a while since I posted here. I wanted to share the farmhouse I drew that I followed along with In @davidhohn ’s video. I would like some feedback on any mistakes I’ve made with it! 😊

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      A Former User @MiaNova last edited by 28 May 2024, 21:22

      @MiaNova your drawing follows the rules of 3-point perspective very well. To challenge yourself, try putting a circular window upstairs in the front.πŸ™‚ It will provide a bit of contrast to all the rectangular windows.

      MiaNova 1 Reply Last reply 29 May 2024, 01:51 Reply Quote 2
      • davidhohn
        davidhohn SVS Instructor Pro @MiaNova last edited by 28 May 2024, 22:03

        @MiaNova Very nicely done!

        www.davidhohn.com
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        twitter.com/david_hohn

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        • MiaNova
          MiaNova @Guest last edited by 29 May 2024, 01:51

          @thomas-young ooo that is great idea! Thank you 😊

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          • MiaNova
            MiaNova @davidhohn last edited by 29 May 2024, 01:52

            @davidhohn thank you so much!! I enjoy learning from your videos πŸ˜€

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            • jahn
              jahn last edited by 2 Jun 2024, 01:14

              Hi! this is great! I actually thought it was a screenshot from a 3D modeling program at first lol
              The first and main thing that I noticed was the edge of the roof. They seemed too long on the backside, so I threw the perspective lines just to check. It's a little finicky but the only issue I saw. Hope it helps to see what I see!
              Screenshot 2024-06-01 at 9.11.09β€―PM.png

              MiaNova 2 Replies Last reply 5 Dec 2024, 16:44 Reply Quote 1
              • MiaNova
                MiaNova @jahn last edited by 15 Jun 2024, 03:17

                @jahn Thank you so much!!! I appreciate the feedback 😊

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                • Jim Algar
                  Jim Algar last edited by 15 Jun 2024, 10:52

                  At first glance I thought this was 3D so that's a good indicator, ha! Might not strictly be in the scope of the assignment, but to echo the suggested round window I'd consider putting in a couple of random elements near the base of the building like a couple of barrels etc. The shape would add more contast and be an additional challenge too.

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                    gwendolynium @MiaNova last edited by 16 Jun 2024, 15:45

                    @MiaNova The problem I see is that the vertical guidelines don't quite converge on a single point below, and the verticals in the drawing don't follow the guidelines. Here's a picture to show what I mean. If you adjust these, your drawing will look much more solid and believable. Good luck!
                    temp.jpg

                    MiaNova 1 Reply Last reply 5 Dec 2024, 16:40 Reply Quote 0
                    • MiaNova
                      MiaNova @gwendolynium last edited by 5 Dec 2024, 16:40

                      @gwendolynium thank you so much!! I appreciate it, sorry I’m so late on this πŸ˜…

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                      • MiaNova
                        MiaNova @jahn last edited by 5 Dec 2024, 16:44

                        @jahn thank you so much!! ☺️

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