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    Jack and the Bean Stalk Art Rework

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    • Rob Smith
      Rob Smith last edited by

      I wanted to rework for the piece I did for the last Third Thursday. Lee had a lot of good critique to offer.

      The first thing I did was do a repaint of part of the image. On a new piece of paper I modified my original sketch and transferred it to a new piece of watercolor paper (140b). After the painting was done I scanned the new image into Photoshop and then merged it into the original image blending the edges with eraser tool.

      JBnew_housesm.jpg

      Here is the final image with additional tweaks.

      Jackweb.jpg

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      • Lee White
        Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

        Very nice! thanks for the extra effort. It really does make a difference! : )

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        • Leontine
          Leontine last edited by

          I love the colors!

          Leontine
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          • Lynn Larson
            Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

            Beautiful!! I love how you deepened the colors on the vine, and the cat makes me giggle hehe

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            • Maile McCarthy
              Maile McCarthy @Rob Smith last edited by

              @Rob-Smith Looks great. The house is much more legible now, and I'm glad you brought the bird in closer. It's so cute 🙂

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              • Rich Green
                Rich Green SVS OG last edited by

                Yes I totally agree with everyone else that the colors and the adjustments made to the house are all really nice and make a really positive impact on the piece overall!

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                • Steve Young
                  Steve Young last edited by

                  You have made such a great improvement.

                  Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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