9 Sept 2024, 17:15

Hi Enni! I wanted to offer some support--I know you are already doing this but you really need to keep pushing, keep experimenting and move forward and make your own books...If i was in your position, I would be making dummy books either from scripts you find online or that you write on your own. Every project like that you take on will show things in your work that could use improvement.

Regarding style--I was in a meeting with an editor once that really liked my work but her feedback was that for the project I was working on that I may need to be straightforward with my lineart and a little less whimsical...prioritizing the ability for my audience to "read" my work. My agent later had asked if that frustrated me and I said absolutely not--styles evolve, feedback helps us improve and to hit a wider audience I may need to make sure that I'm making my art as clear as possible.

With that said--I love the mix of styles you display--there is a lot of energy yet softness to your work. I will admit tho at times, I can get lost with the linework and have trouble seeing what a character is or what their expression is. Kids can see a lot but thinking about the audience--is your work VERY readable to a younger kiddo? I worry at times that there is too much visually happening and the lines or dots are very thin or light and hard for me to read. Keep in mind, I gravitate to line work heavy illustrators so that may be a very unfair assessment and may not be helpful to you. If the linework is very thin and whispy, having it on a white background may be hard to read or having a very soft airbrush where the value is VERY light doesnt help the audience see what is what. Which artists do you ACTIVELY look up to? What about their work makes you want to create like they do? Where does your art live up to their examples and where does it fall short? I'm really curious.

Please understand my tone or tastes in work doesnt take away from your skill...you are incredibly skilled.

Keep at it...

Anthony