Business class-FINALLY made a logo!!

[Charlie Eve Ryan]

After watching @Lee-White's business class, I FINALLY made a logo for my portfolio website and to use on mailers etc. Trying to get this whole branding thing down...little steps!

here is it on my website http://www.charlieeveryan.com/

[Rich Green]

You really have a nice clear identity going with your style and your illustrations on your site as well. Looks very professional!

[jacs]

That's lovely!

[Charlie Eve Ryan]

@Rich-Green Thanks so much, Rich. I'm glad it is reading well and coming together. Truly appreciate the kind comments on my work!

[Charlie Eve Ryan]

@jacs Thank you!!

[NoWayMe]

Nice logo @charlie-eve-ryan!!

I didn't watch Lee's class yet, but I did a logo for my website this week-end also! Here is mine :

[Thrace]

@Charlie-Eve-Ryan Really well done and adorable!!

[Charlie Eve Ryan]

@NoWayMe Really nice work and thank you!

If you have time and they can help, I would run this logo by @lee-white or @will-terry.

I don't have much experience with logo design but I know that rhythm, spacing, balance and letter/image clarity at all sizes is important.

The hand letter of the name is really cute and I love that you have two different fonts in different colors that tie into the colors of the girl, but I am not sure if you are running into some spacing and clarity issues and maybe an overall balance issue with the way the letters/words are stacked.

It also looks like the tail of the Y was not followed through smoothly on the curved tail. Right now it does not look purposeful, so it reads as a mistake.

I hope that makes sense and I could be wrong, overall really great start but I think it would be good to have the SVS instructors or someone with more type/logo experience then me weigh in on it.

It is wonderful that you are taking this step in your business!!

[Charlie Eve Ryan]

@Thrace Thanks so much!

[NoWayMe]

@Charlie-Eve-Ryan Thanks Charlie! Good point! I would love to have more feedback on it, I no it's far from perfect, but I thought for now it would be better that just my name in black letter haha! Yours really look awesome by the way!