I made a Flip Book of my book dummy.

[Katrina Fowler]

Thought I'd share my Little Green Man book dummy in Flip book format. Feedback is welcome!
Check it out. HERE

I also started working on color. This is just preliminary color and will more than likely change.

[BradAYoo]

@Katrina-Fowler Thank you so much for sharing your prelims Katrina. Your story reads so very well and the pacing is perfect. I was so sad when the green man crumbled. I enjoined how you showed the girl walking through the snow on pg 3 and forest on pg 7, each foot step in the same panel, which segues into my next thought:

I had a thought about pg 14 that is minor but could help visually. Reading the panels downward as the girl is going up seemed a little disjointed. Showing her progress similar to her walk but as a full pg spread would read more comfortably. I noticed that the green man had something similar a few pages back but you could change the perspective or make it a close up to give it visual differences.

Seriously can not wait to see this completed!

[Katrina Fowler]

@BradAYoo Thanks for the feed back! I'll give pg 14 another look-e-loo. I wanted to emphasize the removal of her coat in this section. As a sort of shedding of winter and climbing to the sun. (will be able to see better with color) Maybe I could have the coat removed in the foreground and see her in the distance climbing the cliff... Puts on thinking cap

Thanks again.