Spring critiques with Lee and Will updated version

[Lee White]

There ya go! Very nice. I'm so glad you were open to making that change. I know if was a big one. But I also knew you could handle it!

What did the client think?

[lmrush]

Very nice. Your pieces are so strong/professional

[Leontine]

@Lee-White The Client is very open to any suggestions, thats nice .

[Leontine]

@lmrush Thank you!

[Leontine]

@Dulcie @Rich-Green @MarshaKayOttumOwen Thank You! Ill Work on the Grandmother and the scarf.

[Leontine]

@Nancy-Gormezano Ill work on the suggestions, the Grandmother and the scarf.

[Leontine]

@Russ-Van-Dine Thank you, stay tuned!

[Lisa Griffn]

Great movement in this illustration and I especially love the thoughtful look on the grandsons face... very sweet and attentive. I read another comment about grandma and also think that her attention should be focused on something in the composition. I know plenty of great knitters who don't look down at their work so possibly looking at her husband or even the cute grandson. Wonderful improvements to this composition! Thanks for sharing your work.

[NoWayMe]

I loved this piece from the beginning (I said "Oh wow" out loud in my living room when I saw it Saturday!). And I really like the changes you've made!

I also think @Rich-Green is right on about the grandma. Something was bugging me with the new version, and I think he put his finger right on it! Can't wait to see the final version.

[Leontine]

Hi guys her's the updated version, please let me know if you have more suggestions for improvement...