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    Astrid - from sketch to final piece

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    • Thrace
      Thrace last edited by

      Nice! It has a great feeling about it!

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      • Leontine
        Leontine last edited by

        whahaha LOL! its great!

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        • Rob Smith
          Rob Smith last edited by

          Very clever!

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          • Spencer Hale
            Spencer Hale last edited by

            I like seeing the whole process. looks awesome!

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            • Steve Young
              Steve Young last edited by

              Very very well done, they only thing I would do it put the cat above her. Other wise great job so far keep it up.

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              • Rowan Ferguson
                Rowan Ferguson last edited by

                This will be cool!!! The cat seems perhaps a little symmetrical in terms of it's position in the overall composition. I'm wondering if you could create more of a focal triangle by pushing the craft to left and the cat more over Astrid. Pushing the craft left would help balance the piece and offer some visual white space between the open door and Astrid.

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                • Jiří Kůs
                  Jiří Kůs @Rowan Ferguson last edited by

                  @Rowan-Ferguson: Well, composition is still black magic to me 😃 I was really just focused to get a focal point on Astrid. But! I have seen some video on balancing the composition so maybe next time.

                  Concerning my progress... I made like a milion color studies...even with my colored pencils...and end up with this. I just cant get it right, but I am sticking to this one as I am not able to do it better. I just hope I will save it when I get into details and paint over it.

                  Whats worse... it almost looks better without shadow 😕

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                  • Rich Green
                    Rich Green SVS OG @Jiří Kůs last edited by

                    @Jiří-Kůs First of all I love this concept - the fish ship is so clever and my favorite part of your design here. My thought on the shadow is that the cat is above her but still somewhat behind where she is standing. So I am not sure the shadow would be cast over part of her. Maybe it is only on the ground sneaking up to her back foot but leaving her in the light in the foreground?

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                    • Lynn Larson
                      Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                      The characters are just amazing in this!! And yes, your craft is a character! The shadow is throwing me off, It seems like it should be on Astrid or the ship, but over both makes the hovercat too close to Astrid or the ship too small.. The shadow is shortening the distance between Astrid and her ship in my mind.

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                      • Jiří Kůs
                        Jiří Kůs last edited by

                        Thanks both, I guess i will have to do something about that shadow 😃

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                        • Jiří Kůs
                          Jiří Kůs last edited by Jiří Kůs

                          Well, I think I am done, I will have one more look at it tomorrow...

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                          • Lynn Larson
                            Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                            Ooooh...that did the trick! Now it looks like there is distance and the cat is sneaking up on her. The colors are magnificent!

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                            • Rob Smith
                              Rob Smith last edited by

                              Very Cool!

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                              • Naroth Kean
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                                very nice!

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                                • Steve Young
                                  Steve Young last edited by

                                  very well rended.

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