Cowboy illustration commission

[Isaac Vargas Cardenas]

• Cowboy commission , I could use some feedback, I wanna get better and the only way I think is trough other artists advice

[Thrace]

I have never critiqued anyone before because I am self taught and just learning myself so you can keep this in mind. I love your composition the only thing that sticks out to me is on the left side behind the horses it is so digital looking I would add some texture. Otherwise I think it is nice!

[Isaac Vargas Cardenas]

Ok I'll try to do a more natural looking environment , and how about this one? I could use advice cause I'm self thsuth myself too

[Thrace]

Yes, I like this one much better. More texture and vibrant colors!

[Isaac Vargas Cardenas]

@Thrace-Shirley-Mears thanks I think I'll just keep practicing like I've been doing the past few years

[Leontine]

Nice work! I have a tip for coloring with the bucket. Put your tolerance up, and mark Antialias on, then the full parts get all colored and you will not have the grey lines at the edge.

[Isaac Vargas Cardenas]

@Leontine-Gaasenbeek thanks that's a very helpful tip

[Steve Young]

Even better tip is to paint under your lines!

[Isaac Vargas Cardenas]

@Steve-Young ok I'll do that....

[Isaac Vargas Cardenas]

@Steve-Young but there's no need to be rude... I think you're being a little rude here ...

[Steve Young]

Am sorry I did not mean to be, I was only giving honest advice.

[Isaac Vargas Cardenas]

I guess you didn't meant to be ....best of regards

[Grant Brown]

Nice job so far, One thing i think is an issue is your line weight. Its very thick in places . Especially the lines around the grey at the bottom of the horses. You don't want the lines to dominate and take away focus from the image.
keep up the great work

[Isaac Vargas Cardenas]

@Grant-Brown thanks I'll keep that in mind