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    • Lynn Larson
      Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

      I think the new head is good! just darken the outlines on the spots to be consistent with the rest of him 🙂

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      • Javier Diaz
        Javier Diaz last edited by

        It's looking good. I would just push the curve the people are on right now. Maybe make it a bit more twisty.
        Just a quick paintover.
        circuswip.jpg

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        • Maile McCarthy
          Maile McCarthy @Lynn Larson last edited by

          @Lynn-Larson Thanks Lynn.

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          www.mailemccarthyillustration.com

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          • Maile McCarthy
            Maile McCarthy @Javier Diaz last edited by

            @Javier-Diaz Ooh thank you! I love the feel of your curve. I'm going to go work on this now and see how it goes.

            Twitter @MaileMcCarthy
            www.mailemccarthyillustration.com

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            • Maile McCarthy
              Maile McCarthy @Maile McCarthy last edited by Maile McCarthy

              @Javier-Diaz Whew! Okay, here's the update. It was not easy for me to push things this much (and even looking at it now, I can see places where I could have pushed more, especially at the girl/cat section). But I think the result is quite an improvement over the original.

              upload-6a3ff808-4dda-4e89-9c1a-a367c9323c5b

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              • Lynn Larson
                Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                hehe, love it!!

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                • Maile McCarthy
                  Maile McCarthy @Lynn Larson last edited by

                  @Lynn-Larson Thanks 🙂

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                  www.mailemccarthyillustration.com

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                  • Javier Diaz
                    Javier Diaz @Maile McCarthy last edited by

                    @Maile-McCarthy said:

                    @Javier-Diaz Whew! Okay, here's the update. It was not easy for me to push things this much (and even looking at it now, I can see places where I could have pushed more, especially at the girl/cat section). But I think the result is quite an improvement over the original.

                    upload-6a3ff808-4dda-4e89-9c1a-a367c9323c5b

                    Awesome work!! 😃

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                    • Thrace
                      Thrace last edited by

                      Such a big difference from where you started. I know you have to feel good about where it is now and all the great advice along the way!

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                      • Maile McCarthy
                        Maile McCarthy @Javier Diaz last edited by

                        @Javier-Diaz Thank you 🙂

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                        www.mailemccarthyillustration.com

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                        • Maile McCarthy
                          Maile McCarthy @Thrace last edited by

                          @Thrace-Shirley-Mears said:

                          Such a big difference from where you started. I know you have to feel good about where it is now and all the great advice along the way!

                          I do! I'm so grateful to be a part of these forums.

                          Twitter @MaileMcCarthy
                          www.mailemccarthyillustration.com

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