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    • Russ Van Dine
      Russ Van Dine last edited by

      So, here is my real version for this month. I am going to do the "Will Terry" method all the way through on this one. I want to see how my little piece will come out using this method. First, critiques please of form, shapes, content, etc
      Thomas had almost retrieved his little rocket when a couple of boys thought it would be funny to open the sluice gate...
      0_1473470410515_thomas had almost.jpg

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      • natiwata
        natiwata SVS OG last edited by

        One thing I like to do is imagine scenes like this from different angles, like moving the camera around in the scene, and find what is the most dramatic or impactful. Here's a quick one I tried with this scene just to lend a new perspective.

        0_1473573184028_rocket.jpg

        Nat Iwata
        www.iwataillustration.com

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        • Russ Van Dine
          Russ Van Dine last edited by

          I really like this perspective better! Nice job Natiwata. I tried to imagine different angles while still making ht story obvious, this is a great skill set you have.

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