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    Inkling - my Inktober project

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    • smceccarelli
      smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

      Page 5. I do not have the feeling that my inkling skills are getting any better.....
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      • evilrobot
        evilrobot SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

        @smceccarelli This is looking good. I think you're doing great. I actually think you could get a job doing this. It's just as good if not better than a lot of stuff I've seen from the major publishers. I like the story telling and the pacing.

        http://www.palacioillustration.com/

        https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

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        • smceccarelli
          smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

          @evilrobot Thank you for your encouraging words! The breakdown of the story in panels was actually the most interesting part of the project and the one I am most happy with. It got me thinking about graphic novels for mid-grade and YA (my daughter gets them from the school library) and a project that may be perfect for this format. I may give it a go at some point...when I have sorted out all of the other stuff I am jostling at the same time...

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          • smceccarelli
            smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

            Page 6
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            • mcucchi
              mcucchi last edited by

              Great work! This is really fun!

              portfolio: moniquecucchi.com
              instagram.com/crookedandbeautiful
              shop: crookedandbeautiful.com

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              • smceccarelli
                smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                Page 7. I know I timed all of this, but it feels funny to be in the middle of October and not even remotely mid-way through the story....
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                • smceccarelli
                  smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by smceccarelli

                  Page 8 - this is the first page where I feel my inking has gotten slightly better....but it may get worse again 😉
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                  • evilrobot
                    evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                    Looks good....:)

                    http://www.palacioillustration.com/

                    https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

                    https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

                    https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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                    • smceccarelli
                      smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                      Page 9 - now I am halfway through the story!

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                      • smceccarelli
                        smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                        And the big bad, woefully time-consuming central spread....took me three days of drawing (back in September) and one full day of inking...
                        But this was the image I had in my head that triggered the whole story three years ago...so happy to have it out of my system now...
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                        • Kevin Longueil
                          Kevin Longueil SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                          @smceccarelli Beautiful!!

                          Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                          https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                          • Dulcie
                            Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                            It is such a huge project to do all of this! I'm enjoying the story you've created, and wondering what is going to happen next! My main thought (not as a critique but just as an interested reader of the story), was after he saw the first creature come to life...when he started drawing more bizarre creatures, I wanted to tell him not to do that - maybe would better to test the theory by drawing a cute kitty cat, a huge chest of treasure, a pot of cash (or a pretty companion even!)... but then that might not make such a fun story 🙂

                            So I will look forward to seeing what happens, after the ink goes down the drain!

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                            • smceccarelli
                              smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @Dulcie last edited by

                              @Dulcie He is an irresponsible young artist 😉

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                              • smceccarelli
                                smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                Page 12!
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                                • evilrobot
                                  evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                                  Lol....yep that is what men would do....

                                  http://www.palacioillustration.com/

                                  https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

                                  https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

                                  https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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                                  • smceccarelli
                                    smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

                                    @evilrobot That is why I called him Adam 🙂

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                                    • smceccarelli
                                      smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                      Page 13

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                                      • Russ Van Dine
                                        Russ Van Dine last edited by

                                        too cool

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                                        • smceccarelli
                                          smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                          Page 14 and 15 - almost there!

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                                          • evilrobot
                                            evilrobot SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                                            @smceccarelli It's looking great. Love the story.

                                            http://www.palacioillustration.com/

                                            https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

                                            https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

                                            https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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