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    Inkling - my Inktober project

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    • smceccarelli
      smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by smceccarelli

      Page 8 - this is the first page where I feel my inking has gotten slightly better....but it may get worse again 😉
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      • evilrobot
        evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

        Looks good....:)

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        • smceccarelli
          smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

          Page 9 - now I am halfway through the story!

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          • smceccarelli
            smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

            And the big bad, woefully time-consuming central spread....took me three days of drawing (back in September) and one full day of inking...
            But this was the image I had in my head that triggered the whole story three years ago...so happy to have it out of my system now...
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            • Kevin Longueil
              Kevin Longueil SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

              @smceccarelli Beautiful!!

              Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
              https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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              • Dulcie
                Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                It is such a huge project to do all of this! I'm enjoying the story you've created, and wondering what is going to happen next! My main thought (not as a critique but just as an interested reader of the story), was after he saw the first creature come to life...when he started drawing more bizarre creatures, I wanted to tell him not to do that - maybe would better to test the theory by drawing a cute kitty cat, a huge chest of treasure, a pot of cash (or a pretty companion even!)... but then that might not make such a fun story 🙂

                So I will look forward to seeing what happens, after the ink goes down the drain!

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                • smceccarelli
                  smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @Dulcie last edited by

                  @Dulcie He is an irresponsible young artist 😉

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                  • smceccarelli
                    smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                    Page 12!
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                    • evilrobot
                      evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                      Lol....yep that is what men would do....

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                      • smceccarelli
                        smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

                        @evilrobot That is why I called him Adam 🙂

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                        • smceccarelli
                          smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                          Page 13

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                          • Russ Van Dine
                            Russ Van Dine last edited by

                            too cool

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                            • smceccarelli
                              smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                              Page 14 and 15 - almost there!

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                              • evilrobot
                                evilrobot SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                                @smceccarelli It's looking great. Love the story.

                                http://www.palacioillustration.com/

                                https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

                                https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

                                https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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                                • smceccarelli
                                  smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                                  The last three pages!
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                                  • Dulcie
                                    Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                                    Congratulations on finishing such a mammoth project! You must have had enough of inking for at least a few days, now 😉

                                    It is a very clever story, beautifully drawn and I've enjoyed finding out each day what happens next! I was pleased that at least he tried to do something sensible with the ink by drawing a lovely lady companion...then I was worried for him...and what a bittersweet ending. I like that you left it ambiguous. Great job 🙂

                                    www.dulciemascord.com
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                                    • evilrobot
                                      evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                                      Congrats on finishing up the project! Great ending.

                                      http://www.palacioillustration.com/

                                      https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

                                      https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

                                      https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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                                      • Kevin Longueil
                                        Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by

                                        @smceccarelli What I loved best about your story was that I did not predict any of your next pages along the way - one of my favorite unexpected bits was that he slept on the floor and was not in any way a cad - I loved the gestures of the cat and what he added to the narrative of each panel too - a fantastic and sad story - this is a really great piece of work you have made!!
                                        ( I hope you are working on a book of some kind)

                                        Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                                        https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                                        • Doha
                                          Doha last edited by

                                          Wow! Amazing story. Very simple yet captivating!
                                          You reminded me of a storybook I had when I was little, of a young Chinese boy who finds a magic brush and every finished painting of his will come to life.
                                          I would love to see more work like this!

                                          Doha Koma

                                          www.Komaart.net
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