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    Inkling - my Inktober project

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    • Dulcie
      Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

      It is such a huge project to do all of this! I'm enjoying the story you've created, and wondering what is going to happen next! My main thought (not as a critique but just as an interested reader of the story), was after he saw the first creature come to life...when he started drawing more bizarre creatures, I wanted to tell him not to do that - maybe would better to test the theory by drawing a cute kitty cat, a huge chest of treasure, a pot of cash (or a pretty companion even!)... but then that might not make such a fun story 🙂

      So I will look forward to seeing what happens, after the ink goes down the drain!

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      • smceccarelli
        smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @Dulcie last edited by

        @Dulcie He is an irresponsible young artist 😉

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        • smceccarelli
          smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

          Page 12!
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          • evilrobot
            evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

            Lol....yep that is what men would do....

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            • smceccarelli
              smceccarelli Pro SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

              @evilrobot That is why I called him Adam 🙂

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              • smceccarelli
                smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                Page 13

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                • Russ Van Dine
                  Russ Van Dine last edited by

                  too cool

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                  • smceccarelli
                    smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                    Page 14 and 15 - almost there!

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                    • evilrobot
                      evilrobot SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                      @smceccarelli It's looking great. Love the story.

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                      • smceccarelli
                        smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                        The last three pages!
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                        • Dulcie
                          Dulcie SVS OG last edited by

                          Congratulations on finishing such a mammoth project! You must have had enough of inking for at least a few days, now 😉

                          It is a very clever story, beautifully drawn and I've enjoyed finding out each day what happens next! I was pleased that at least he tried to do something sensible with the ink by drawing a lovely lady companion...then I was worried for him...and what a bittersweet ending. I like that you left it ambiguous. Great job 🙂

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                          • evilrobot
                            evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                            Congrats on finishing up the project! Great ending.

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                            • Kevin Longueil
                              Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by

                              @smceccarelli What I loved best about your story was that I did not predict any of your next pages along the way - one of my favorite unexpected bits was that he slept on the floor and was not in any way a cad - I loved the gestures of the cat and what he added to the narrative of each panel too - a fantastic and sad story - this is a really great piece of work you have made!!
                              ( I hope you are working on a book of some kind)

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                              • Doha
                                Doha last edited by

                                Wow! Amazing story. Very simple yet captivating!
                                You reminded me of a storybook I had when I was little, of a young Chinese boy who finds a magic brush and every finished painting of his will come to life.
                                I would love to see more work like this!

                                Doha Koma

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