Work in progress - Journey/Transport
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It looks wonderful!! Really super nice, everything about it is perfect!
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Amazing work. Great color. Especially the steam and the clouds. You got a great piece here.
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@Lee-Holland Love how this turned out - it is so beautifully rendered out!
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very nice!! this is expertly painted and I really love the style.
Since you are working on perspective, the one thing I would encourage you to adjust is the way the cabin is sitting on the deck of the ship. It's actually rotating to the left more than the rest of the boat is. In order to fix that in the drawing stage, make sure the center line for the boat and the cabin line up by drawing through the objects. So if we line it up correctly, we would see a bit more of the face of the cabin. Kinda like this:
Really great work though! I think this one is a keeper! : )
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@Lee-White Thank for the critiq lee. I really appreciate your input on this one it took me quite a while. i'll have a look at the perspective And adjust it If I can. This will be a nice piece for my portfolio once everything in right.
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Thank you @smceccarelli @rich-green @evilrobot It really means a lot to me to get some kind words said about my work. Thank you.
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love this, the only thing I would change is the saturationof the bridge work, too black, draws the eye...love the rest of it!
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okay, one more, I would like the cabin o the transport closer to us to be lighter and maybe even the same color as the boat portion.
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@Russ-Van-Dine Hi Russ Thanks for the critic I'll have look over the image over the next couple of days and make some changes. Thanks for all the help.
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This is lovely!
