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    • Thrace
      Thrace @Naroth Kean last edited by

      @Naroth-Cow Nice job! I love the colors and the owl and mice. Poor little bunny is not happy about getting wet.🐰🐭

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      • Steve Young
        Steve Young last edited by

        Nice picture, very sad 😞

        Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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        • Rob Smith
          Rob Smith last edited by

          Nicely done. I like the mood you have created with this painting.

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          • DanetteDraws
            DanetteDraws last edited by

            @Naroth-Cow AHHHH! I love this! Amazing work. This reminds me of a game my brother and I played where we hopped from the bed to other pieces of furniture, etc. making sure we never touched the floor... because if we did, the gators or other sea creatures would nip at our ankles!

            My only suggestion for improvement: I can't tell what the thing is in the boat on the left since it's too dark. Maybe define that area a little more.

            Oh - I just got this too. I was going to ask if you're wearing a skirt in your dream but then I realized its a pillow. This could be made more clear as well.

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            • Naroth Kean
              Naroth Kean last edited by

              Thanks a lot guys for the comment.
              @Leontine Gaasenbeek it was done digitally.
              @ DanetteDraws thanks for the tip I'm going to make some changes later.

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              • Ben J Hutchison
                Ben J Hutchison last edited by

                The watercolor look you achieved digitally is amazing. The only thing I would see is if there is a way to keep the watercolor texture on the lighter side of the bed. It is the only section that looks like it might not be watercolor.

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                • Naroth Kean
                  Naroth Kean last edited by Naroth Kean

                  went to make a quick change before going to work. I hope you can tell my dog is on the left right now haha it was trying to fish with its tail. @Ben J Hutchison, yes I noticed that too and thanks for the tip!
                  once-up-a-dream.jpg

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                  • DanetteDraws
                    DanetteDraws @Naroth Kean last edited by

                    @Naroth-Cow yes, definitely more legible now! Ouch though - I think that might hurt, fishing with one's tail haha looks as if he's about to get a few biters too!

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                    • Naroth Kean
                      Naroth Kean last edited by

                      My dog was crazy she loved bee. Every time I saw her with a swollen face I knew she had messed up with some bee. She never learned her lesson (for some reason she seemed to enjoy chasing after bees).

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                      • Maile McCarthy
                        Maile McCarthy @Naroth Kean last edited by

                        @Naroth-Cow I love the dog. I didn't notice her until you pointed her out. I wonder if you could hit her with some of the same highlights you have where her boat meets the water.

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