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    • Doha
      Doha last edited by

      Your style here is very beautiful.
      It does give the feeling of a sad, and lonely place. I can see a lost pet or a lost kid.
      I can also see ghosts in here (maybe a lonely ghost sitting on the dumpster).

      Doha Koma

      www.Komaart.net
      https://www.instagram.com/dohakomart/
      https://www.facebook.com/dohakoma/

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      • Nazuba
        Nazuba @Doha last edited by

        @Doha Thank you so much! I also posted this on SVS facebook page and someone said "No matter how hard she tried, Yani could not forget that day"
        So yes, a lonely child. Now you said a ghost. Maybe they meet here?
        I am pretty scared of character design though...

        https://www.dribbble.com/nazuba
        https://www.instagram.com/nazubahere/

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        • Doha
          Doha last edited by

          That is a nice concept. I can definitely see them together.
          good luck with the C.D. it's always a fun process.
          looking forward to see the finish painting.

          Doha Koma

          www.Komaart.net
          https://www.instagram.com/dohakomart/
          https://www.facebook.com/dohakoma/

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          • amberwingart
            amberwingart last edited by

            What a lovely start - as Doha said, you've got a great depiction of a sad and lonely place. I can also see a stray dog here or a homeless man.

            Perhaps a homeless man sharing his blanket and a can of food with his dog?

            "No matter what life threw at them, Harvey and Smokey always knew they had each other. And that made all of the bad things a little less bad and all of the sad things a little less sad."

            That's what came to my mind. I'm looking forward to seeing this finished!

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            • Nazuba
              Nazuba @amberwingart last edited by

              @amberwingart Thanks so much for the reply! A man and a dog comes first in mind when I see a dumpster anyway lol. I personally think the girl and the ghost is a bit more interesting although I have no idea how I will execute it.

              https://www.dribbble.com/nazuba
              https://www.instagram.com/nazubahere/

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              • Lee White
                Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by Lee White

                ha! it's so funny how a theme can become public once you start thinking about it. I was asked to illustrate a story about a girl who sees ghosts around London so I am developing some imagery on this theme too.

                Here's a quick paint on how I would handle it.

                0_1478637349519_1478431795903-lonely-street-cropped.jpg

                SVS Faculty Instructor
                www.leewhiteillustration.com

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                • natiwata
                  natiwata SVS OG last edited by natiwata

                  "It was dark inside, and smelled like coffee grounds and old bananas, but at least no one would see Annabelle crying."

                  Lovely illustration, really nice atmosphere/mood. Made me think what if you made almost an entire book without seeing the main character? Actually the book "Shy" did something like that.

                  Nat Iwata
                  www.iwataillustration.com

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                  • Nazuba
                    Nazuba @natiwata last edited by

                    @natiwata Thank you for your reply!
                    Your prompt is lovely and it can verymuch turn into a flowing story for my portfolio but I am scared of pieces like those 😛

                    https://www.dribbble.com/nazuba
                    https://www.instagram.com/nazubahere/

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                    • Pamela Fraley
                      Pamela Fraley SVS OG @Nazuba last edited by

                      @Nazuba My first thought is a little girl sitting on the fire escape talking to an imaginary monster friend who is sitting on the dumpster. Great picture!

                      instagram.com/fraleycreates

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                      • Nazuba
                        Nazuba @Pamela Fraley last edited by

                        @Pamela-Fraley Thank you! Yes I am pretty much set on a ghost and a girl. Got sucked up in projects, Coming back to it now. Thanks for stopping by!

                        https://www.dribbble.com/nazuba
                        https://www.instagram.com/nazubahere/

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