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    LOGO DESIGN - "GET OFF THE BUS"

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    • Kevin Longueil
      Kevin Longueil SVS OG @andyjewett last edited by

      @andyjewett This looks great - love the texture in the lettering - not sure if you are looking for feedback on this? i did have two things that popped up for me - the line of the top edge of the bus where it hits the text and the spacing of the windows - not really issues i think but they are the things that catch my eye - for some reason i want to erase that little bit of roofline between the last widow and text - i did a quick draw over to show my thoughts...hope you don't mind - i included the grid technique for making evenly spaced receding lines - i'm sure you know how to do that but it might be new to someone - anyways.. those are my thoughts - feel free to ignore 🙂

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      Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
      https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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      • andyjewett
        andyjewett @Kevin Longueil last edited by andyjewett

        @Kevin-Longueil thanks for the thoughts! Always open to constructive crits... thanks again!

        I still have to build a bus on stage to scale as well. So yeah, good times.

        Andy Jewett
        ILLUSTRATOR | DESIGNER

        PORTFOLIO: andyjewett.com
        TW/IG: @andyjewett

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        • andyjewett
          andyjewett @Kevin Longueil last edited by

          @Kevin-Longueil here it is reworked taking your suggestions, thanks again!

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          Andy Jewett
          ILLUSTRATOR | DESIGNER

          PORTFOLIO: andyjewett.com
          TW/IG: @andyjewett

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          • lmrush
            lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

            Nice! Looks great!

            Lisa Rush
            www.lisarushgallery.com
            www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
            www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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            • andyjewett
              andyjewett last edited by

              T-shirt design to go with the campaign...

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              Andy Jewett
              ILLUSTRATOR | DESIGNER

              PORTFOLIO: andyjewett.com
              TW/IG: @andyjewett

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              • Kevin Longueil
                Kevin Longueil SVS OG @andyjewett last edited by

                @andyjewett really like the retro style - it looks very well done!

                Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                • andyjewett
                  andyjewett @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                  @Kevin-Longueil Thanks! I do a fair amount of logo and apparel work at my day job so it's always fun to try and come up with something decent... I usually try to make things that I would be willing to wear (when possible).

                  Andy Jewett
                  ILLUSTRATOR | DESIGNER

                  PORTFOLIO: andyjewett.com
                  TW/IG: @andyjewett

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                  • andyjewett
                    andyjewett last edited by

                    I have been slammed lately with work so I certainly apologize for my absence on the forums... starting to work my way back as I can.

                    Thought you might enjoy seeing the graphics and stage built bus in the wild... thanks for looking!

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                    Andy Jewett
                    ILLUSTRATOR | DESIGNER

                    PORTFOLIO: andyjewett.com
                    TW/IG: @andyjewett

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                    • MOO
                      MOO SVS OG last edited by

                      Looks great.

                      Marsha Ottum Owen

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                      • MirkaH
                        MirkaH last edited by

                        these look nice. great job!

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                        • drawingmelee
                          drawingmelee last edited by

                          Looking good! 🙂

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