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    Tell me what you think is wrong with this new piece.

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    • Leontine
      Leontine @Eric Castleman last edited by

      @Eric-Castleman I love the design and the background, the sketchy scrappy feel. The rooftop texture is a bit distracting. Perhaps you can find inspiration in The credits of Pixars Ratatouille and Tangled?

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nJtUdm3TLZ8

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