Working on the 50 object challenge, love some feed back.

[Bob Szesnat]

Hi folks.
I have been doing the #50 objects challenge following Will Terry's videos. I'm wondering if anybody else is doing it? If there is another place on the forums I should be posting rather than here? If so let me know, I'd love to provide feedback.

I chose to do a video game store. I got through the main concept stage and now I am looking at examples and trying to get the objects more accurate.

[smceccarelli]

Your thumbnail is cool, but I am wondering what is the focal point? I think the challenge lives on social media (Will has given an hashtag), but posting here is cool too.

[Chip Valecek]

I agree, great start but I am missing the focal point and the story it tells. I will be doing this challenge, but in a few months as I am on some other projects right now.

[evilrobot]

@Bob-Szesnat also think it's a great start but agree with the others. Not sure the story or the focal point. Right now my eye goes to the dinosaur and then to the window that his head is pointing towards.

[Bob Szesnat]

You all rock. My idea was to have a dog and cat doing a dance off on the DDR Machine in the upper center near the doors. I can see how this is getting lost in my thumbnail. Thanks for your feedback guys.

[Bob Szesnat]

Here is my update. I decided to change the perspective to focus on the more important pieces. I went with blocking in with paint rather than lines so that I could work on my values.

Thanks folks for your help.