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      Tyler Blake last edited by

      These are both done with copic markers, I am looking for constructive criticism. I printed out several copies of the original ink drawing so I can play with different color patterns.

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      • Eric Castleman
        Eric Castleman last edited by

        Those suck! There, I helped you!

        Jk, these are remarkable! Pretty much 10/10

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        • BenR
          BenR last edited by

          I've used copics but not a ton. I would say for the yellow raptor though, it looks like you've used a cool gray for the shadow, but maybe use a a cool light blue or something which could give it a bit more dimension? Just a thought.

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            Tyler Blake @Eric Castleman last edited by

            @Eric-Castleman Ha! Thanks Eric 🙂

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              Tyler Blake @BenR last edited by

              @BenR Thanks Ben! I'm going to try that, I had wondered if it didn't need more volume. You're right, I did use grey for the shading on the raptor. There's something about the mouth that bothers me, but I can't quite put my finger on it...

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