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    Worthy of going into the portfolio? (update 2/27)

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    • Perrij
      Perrij last edited by Perrij

      Wow, sorry I post so often guys. I'm needy ;n;
      I whipped this up for fun today and ended up really liking it. But I've stared at it so long and I'm not sure if I'm completely loopy and should keep it as a "for kicks" piece, or put it into my portfolio. Honest thoughts?
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      https://perrijs.myportfolio.com/

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      • RobinSlee
        RobinSlee last edited by

        I like it, but it is not immediately obvious that she in half-submerged in water. Perhaps some more visual clues will help. Some floating leaves, some ripples or even some clever light rays could really help sell the piece? Anyways, I hope it helps? Regards, Rob.

        Site: Idrawcreatures.com
        Shop: RobinSleeDesigns.etsy.com

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        • Perrij
          Perrij last edited by

          Thanks a lot, @RobinSlee And you're right, when I showed it around people usually went "Oh, she's under water". Those are some great practical solutions aaand I think I'm going to put em into practice. ❤

          https://perrijs.myportfolio.com/

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          • Perrij
            Perrij last edited by

            Updated Image!

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            https://perrijs.myportfolio.com/

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            • Tyson Ranes
              Tyson Ranes @Perrij last edited by

              @Perrij really like this style, has a cool feel.

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