Delicious Sketches (Feedback Welcome)

Leontine

great creations! I think your Ninja needs a little work on the legs, as in example the feet are ar bit turned to much from the body. maybe a push on the shadows. but as you've finished the design, try and use some colors, it will be fun! Hope it helps a bit. good luck!

Jack B

Great advice! Thank you!

Here is day one of Inktober!
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Naroth Kean

I really like the drama between really thick and thin line you did. It's great!

Jack B

Inktober Day 2!

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Jack B

The Story Continues...
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Jack B

Naroth Kean

looks great! I would watch out for your white line around the box on the first image, I think the line need to define the shape of the box a bit better, maybe another white line between the fold and the flap of the box. I see a word means Death lol, interesting! keep us posted

Jack B

@Naroth-Kean said:

looks great! I would watch out for your white line around the box on the first image, I think the line need to define the shape of the box a bit better, maybe another white line between the fold and the flap of the box. I see a word means Death lol, interesting! keep us posted

Thanks for the comment! That is good advice too, I will see if I can go in and correct it. And yes, I am not fluent in Japanese but you are correct.