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    • Perrij
      Perrij last edited by

      Oooh! Need style, I like it! It's the upturned eyebrow that makes her look so sad. If you just straighten that out more she'll cheer up immediately. Also, there's a tangent with the small of her back and her elbow. I know this is just a test, but if you're still fiddling around with it, I would leave a little more room for her muscles/organs. Just a teeny bit.

      https://perrijs.myportfolio.com/

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      • Tyson Ranes
        Tyson Ranes @Perrij last edited by

        @Perrij You might have just saved this from the trash heap!!!! Thank you! I took your pointers and worked it a little. Let me know if you see anything else! Thank you!0_1490967202445_Revive Dive 2.0.jpg

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        • Tyson Ranes
          Tyson Ranes @Tyson Ranes last edited by Tyson Ranes

          @Tyson-Ranes I'm getting mixed reviews within my family & close friends wether I should share this with friend and possible client for a diving children's book. I really want to share it with her but am hesitant do to mixed reviews. Should I share or not share ?

          0_1490978997930_image.jpeg

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          • Tyson Ranes
            Tyson Ranes @Tyson Ranes last edited by

            I sent the pic

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            • Tyson Ranes
              Tyson Ranes @Tyson Ranes last edited by

              Got a totally awesome response! Cool! YEEHAW!

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              • Perrij
                Perrij last edited by

                Oh yeah, big difference, looks great. I hope that you get a book out of this! Best wishes

                https://perrijs.myportfolio.com/

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                • Tyson Ranes
                  Tyson Ranes @Perrij last edited by

                  @Perrij you helped me big time on this, thanks again.

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                  • Perrij
                    Perrij last edited by

                    Not at all, my dear, it's my pleasure. Keep us posted on the project

                    https://perrijs.myportfolio.com/

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                      A Former User last edited by

                      I love it! Her expression not only with her face but even her body strongly suggests sadness. Unless you were going for another expression I think you've done an amazing job!

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                      • MOO
                        MOO SVS OG last edited by

                        I like it a lot. Look forward to seeing some more later 🙂

                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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