A Illustration For a Friend
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Oooh! Need style, I like it! It's the upturned eyebrow that makes her look so sad. If you just straighten that out more she'll cheer up immediately. Also, there's a tangent with the small of her back and her elbow. I know this is just a test, but if you're still fiddling around with it, I would leave a little more room for her muscles/organs. Just a teeny bit.
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@Perrij You might have just saved this from the trash heap!!!! Thank you! I took your pointers and worked it a little. Let me know if you see anything else! Thank you!
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@Tyson-Ranes I'm getting mixed reviews within my family & close friends wether I should share this with friend and possible client for a diving children's book. I really want to share it with her but am hesitant do to mixed reviews. Should I share or not share ?
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I sent the pic
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Got a totally awesome response! Cool! YEEHAW!
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Oh yeah, big difference, looks great. I hope that you get a book out of this! Best wishes
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@Perrij you helped me big time on this, thanks again.
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Not at all, my dear, it's my pleasure. Keep us posted on the project
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I love it! Her expression not only with her face but even her body strongly suggests sadness. Unless you were going for another expression I think you've done an amazing job!
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I like it a lot. Look forward to seeing some more later