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    • JamesH
      JamesH @natiwata last edited by

      @natiwata

      Really like that!! Love the extra detail in the scene; changing the colour of the word candy and the backwards 'N' is a nice touch 🙂

      You're name as it is works great - it's clearly there but doesn't detract from the illustration, and then the illustrations and contact details on the reverse side feels nicely balanced!!

      — James H —

      https://www.instagram.com/jameshammertime/

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      • lmrush
        lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

        ooohhhh love 3 the splatter!

        Lisa Rush
        www.lisarushgallery.com
        www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
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        • mattramsey
          mattramsey last edited by

          Can't believe how much that black boarder makes the "peas" image pop. I think the changes you made to the image are very strong and bump it up to another level of good.

          I'd vote for that 100%. Awesome work.

          https://www.inprnt.com/gallery/mattramsey/
          https://mattramsey.artstation.com/
          https://twitter.com/mramseyART

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          • Rich Green
            Rich Green SVS OG @natiwata last edited by

            @natiwata This update looks fantastic Nat. The black border is really sharp and does really make things pop. Beautiful work as always!

            www.richgreenart.com instagram.com/richgreenart/

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            • QuietYell
              QuietYell SVS OG @natiwata last edited by

              @natiwata Is this meant to be a single oversized postcard or 2 separate ones with black boarders or 2 separate ones that you are presenting on a black background?

              I do like how you tucked your name subtly at the bottom left on the walrus

              great work, buddy!

              Scott Monaco | QuietYell.com
              IG/FB/LI: @QuietYell
              IG-2: @QuietYellSketches
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              • NoWayMe
                NoWayMe last edited by

                Perfect!!! 🙂 I agree with @JamesH for "candy", really nice touch! Also the fridge looks good, I think there was a little too much cupboard in your other version!

                For the back, I noticed a tiny detail that probably doesn't matter. You cropped the bottom left image RIGHT on the tip of the finger and the little boys right at the neck... which creates odd tangents. Since I already saw this painting before, I know it is a crop of the full image, but an art director might think it's the full image and if it was, the composition wouldn't be great...

                Finally, I agree with everyone else, the black border is really making everything pop!

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                • Tyson Ranes
                  Tyson Ranes @natiwata last edited by

                  @natiwata totally awesome postcard! Beautiful work

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                  • smceccarelli
                    smceccarelli Pro SVS OG last edited by

                    Really beautiful! Works much better with the name in the bottom left corner!

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                    • QuietYell
                      QuietYell SVS OG @smceccarelli last edited by

                      This is a little off topic:

                      @smceccarelli I clicked the up arrow to "like" your post, but it still shows "0" and when I clicked again it went to "-1" (so i clicked again to make it go back to "0" even though it should show "1") - Do you notice this issue on your side? Just wondering if this is a momentary glitch or if I somehow did something wrong.

                      Scott Monaco | QuietYell.com
                      IG/FB/LI: @QuietYell
                      IG-2: @QuietYellSketches
                      TW/PIN/BEH/DEVART: @ScottMonaco
                      SCBWI: http://bit.ly/1r8Dmqr

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                      • Kevin Longueil
                        Kevin Longueil SVS OG @QuietYell last edited by

                        @QuietYell Hey Scott - this has happened to me a few times over the past 2 years - a couple of folks here have received panicked chat messages when i thought i had down voted them by mistake - i did eventually figure out that you can go into your profile and check if you have down voted anyone - (when i found that out i clicked it and found i had inadvertently down voted someones who's work i admired 😞 i think i must have done it while scrolling on the iPad)

                        Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                        https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                        • QuietYell
                          QuietYell SVS OG @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                          @Kevin-Longueil ahh interesting - thanks!

                          Scott Monaco | QuietYell.com
                          IG/FB/LI: @QuietYell
                          IG-2: @QuietYellSketches
                          TW/PIN/BEH/DEVART: @ScottMonaco
                          SCBWI: http://bit.ly/1r8Dmqr

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