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    • Maile McCarthy
      Maile McCarthy @Naroth Kean last edited by

      @Naroth-Cow I love how this is turning out -- the color and texture, and the expressions of the characters really bring your concept to life. I love the pig's drippy nose 😛

      I might suggest changing something about the rope binding the two foreground characters, so that it's not parallel to and flush with the bottom of the page. I think if you had it more askew, so that it got more cropped off on the pig side, we would still get the impression that they were bound together.

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      • Naroth Kean
        Naroth Kean last edited by

        @Maile-McCarthy I see what you mean there I'm going to change it a bit. I never had the rope in the first place then I added one, I guess I might not need it at all. Thank you for the advice!!!

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        • ?
          A Former User last edited by

          Here my one more take on the piece.
          feasting-on-red-and-pink.jpg

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          • Lynn Larson
            Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

            Oooh...they are going all out! Party flags and everything! Red looks so mad, i love it hehe!

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            • Steve Young
              Steve Young last edited by

              Really great work!

              Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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              • ?
                A Former User last edited by

                @Lynn-Larson @Steve-Young
                Thanks guys I want to add some color to the flags but hopefully it's not to much of attention grabbing. Is it ok that we use 3rd Thursday piece for portfolio?

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                • Thrace
                  Thrace @Guest last edited by

                  @Naroth-Kean yes, that's one of the objectives to make pieces for your portfolio.

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                  • Maile McCarthy
                    Maile McCarthy @Guest last edited by

                    @Naroth-Kean I'm loving this. The wolves' shadows read so much better now.

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                    • Rich Green
                      Rich Green SVS OG last edited by

                      Looks so good @naroth-cow!

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                      • Naroth Kean
                        Naroth Kean last edited by

                        @Rich-Green Thanks a lot Rich!

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