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    Need feedback on my paintings. :)

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    • Calvin Tony Shrumpish
      Calvin Tony Shrumpish last edited by Calvin Tony Shrumpish

      Did these drawings after finishing the course "Painting light and shadow", need constructive comments! 🙂

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      • Eric Castleman
        Eric Castleman @Calvin Tony Shrumpish last edited by

        @Calvin-Tony-Shrumpish I think thewe are really good. Depending on what your aim is with your art would change what my opinion would be on what to add or subtract. My only real suggestion is to add more textures, or experiment with different ways of rendering, and maybe add a bit more overlapping in your scenes.

        Take my advice as coming from somebody who is learning, so there are better people around here to give you advice. Hope that helps.

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