Working on an inked illustration piece with hand drawn lettering. Looking for feed back.

[smceccarelli]

Disney artists said "Some things are better left undrawn". They were referring to the fact that certain point of views and poses simply look bad in drawings, no matter how good the artist is: it is in the nature of how the brain perceives a photo vs a drawing. In this case, I agree with @TessW that her pose is not working, especially the legs. It is also not the best pose to feature, as Tess pointed out. One way to go is to ask yourself what kind of emotion you want to convey in your pose. Determination? Courage? Self-confidence? Harmony with nature? Some poses will be better suited to represent any of these feelings than others.
I love the lettering, especially how you wrote "mountain"!

[Bob Szesnat]

@Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen Thanks for your kind words and advice. Yes, it is done digitally. Changes are easily made.
The reference/model had her legs crossed and so when the perspective changed from being more of a top down view to more of a side view it made the legs look odd. It's nice to know what other people see and feel about it before I do corrections.
I'm glad you like the hand lettering. Unsure if the Mountain type looks good with the top part of the text. What do you think?
Thanks so much for replying.

[Bob Szesnat]

@TessW Thanks for taking the time to give such a thoughtful reply and thanks for showing your point in the gymnastic photos. Yes, I totally see what you mean about the added edge making the pose seem strange when she is just standing on a standard ledge. I guess that most be my brain trying to fill in the gaps. Thanks for pointing that out. I can now make it much dynamic image once I correct it.
Thanks for liking my lettering as well. Doing lettering is so much fun, I hope to get better at it.

[Bob Szesnat]

@smceccarelli Thanks. I never heard that quote before and I'm glad you brought it up. I am realizing that I am attracted, subconsciously, to those dynamic angled photos and they aren't what I should be depended on while using reference. They are great Photos but that doesn't make them great drawings. I am starting to understand this. I looked for some new images of women holding on to rocks that are more straight on.

[MOO]

@Bob-Szesnat I think it looks good together.

[Bob Szesnat]

I fixed the legs. She still seems to be on a ledge. Though I think she looks like she belongs there (not as odd, like the earlier version). Thanks for the input everyone.

[Joslyn Schmitt]

@Bob-Szesnat I am loving the font and linework on this piece. Great work.

[Bob Szesnat]

Hi folks, thanks so much for all the awesome feedback. I really think the piece is stronger because of it.

[Bob Szesnat]

@joslyn-schmitt Thanks for kind words

[aska]

@bob-szesnat Hi, looking cool:-) If you don't mind, i might suggest one more change. Perhaps you could try to take texture off the sky, so its doesn't mix with the rest.