perspective question.

[MOO]

So, here is what I have done. I just hope it works well enough. I don't expect to be published by some big company. I will publish some and sell to friends. If I ever get to the point that I feel I might have a chance otherwise (and once I can do more digitally) I might give a real publisher a chance but for now, I am learning.

[aska]

@marsha-kay-ottum-owen first and last ones are very cool:)

[MOO]

@aska Thanks. I guess teh middle ones aren't
Maybe because they are uninteresting angles? I did the side view so I could get them all on with my limited ability but I didn't know that then..... I want him to be overcome with chickens and worn out. I am going to think about that. Thanks, Aska! I might need to challenge myself and practice more perspective! That will be good for me.

[TessaW]

@marsha-kay-ottum-owen It's looking good. This is really funny! I'm looking forward to seeing the final on this.

[MOO]

@tessw Thank you! That means a lot I think I'll work on those two middle ones and see if I can make them more interesting

[aska]

@marsha-kay-ottum-owen ii assumed we are choosing a pic out of four... if you are going to use all of them, then middle ones are ok too;) however iam not sure of second one - his face is a bit miserable, maybe too much? And the wing on his face looks strange. Anyway, your art is fun as always,;)

[ambiirae]

@marsha-kay-ottum-owen oh my goodness those chickens are awesome! I love how each one has its own little thing its doing too cute!

[MOO]

@aska The chicken is hugging his face because she loves him On the second one I am trying to have him look concerned for the old chicken on his shin that has just joined the rest. The line is: " Uncle Carl has a chicken on his shin! A chicken on his shin? Yes, a chicken on his shin. It's a scraggly old chicken and it's way too thin."

The last one "uh oh! Here comes the cow!"

[MOO]

@ambiirae Thank you

[aska]

@marsha-kay-ottum-owen Its cool, pls proceed Did you write your text?