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    • TessaW
      TessaW @Tyson Ranes last edited by

      @tyson-ranes Thank you very much!

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        WithLinesOfInk @TessaW last edited by

        @tessw This works perfectly for that intention! I like it!

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          smithdraws @TessaW last edited by

          @tessw This has a lot of things working for it and the way you've staged it with the lighting reads as being from the child's point of view which I think is what you were going for. Only one thing sticks out to me as needing addressed. The child's legs seem too short relative to her arms and torso; some foreshortening is appropriate but as is the legs seem too short.

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            TessaW @smithdraws last edited by

            @smithdraws Thanks! Made them longer. . . hopefully long enough. Put the correction back in the first post.

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