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    • MOO
      MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by

      How's this look? Before I add the rest of the chickens...

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      Marsha Ottum Owen

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      • TessaW
        TessaW last edited by

        This is a tough one. Don't kill me, but I went back to the first image, because I think the overall gesture was working better than this latest version. I tweaked his legs a little and added a shadow and motion lines.

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        • MOO
          MOO SVS OG @TessaW last edited by MOO

          @tessw I promise I won't kill you 🙂 Ha! Hmmm....I know his legs are still a bit funky but I kind of like this one. I might tweak the legs a bit more. Do you think the arms look better forward? It sounded like I was breaking the rules if I did that. I'll work on it and post again so you can tell me what you think. I appreciate your help Tessw. I would never kill you 🙂

          Marsha Ottum Owen

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          • MOO
            MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by MOO

            I have a preference for the first one. I actually took some pictures of my son (which I don't know how to upload without posting them on facebook and I don't think he'd be happy with me if I did because there is a little plumber action going on 🙂 He posed as best he could without actually running. probably needs a little more tweaking her and ther but basically, I feel pretty good about this one right now. I need to go get ready for a camping trip.....so I might not be able to do much more right now. Thanks for your input!

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            Marsha Ottum Owen

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            • TessaW
              TessaW last edited by

              These latest versions are working much better! It's funny how tiny tweaks can make a big difference. That chicken is cracking me up, btw. Oh, and thanks for not killing me.

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              • MOO
                MOO SVS OG @TessaW last edited by

                @tessw Your welcome 🙂 Thanks.

                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                • MOO
                  MOO SVS OG @TessaW last edited by

                  More tweaking..tweeking...isn't that a drug term? ha! Not doing that kind . I think this looks better. What do you think?

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                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                  • aska
                    aska @MOO last edited by

                    @marsha-kay-ottum-owen iam joining at the end, as this was a difficult one;) i think the first version looks better, but it seems to me (could be totally wrong tho, as its just an instinct) that his right knee should be more to the right (at least pararel with his left arm) and his left feet needs to be bend (look at naked bum doll's feet;)

                    Aska
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                    • MOO
                      MOO SVS OG @aska last edited by

                      @aska I feel the best about this one. I don't know why but it feels like it is better aligned. I looked at my son's photo with his leg in running postion at this angle and that's where I got the leg postion from.....kind of reminds me of a super hero pose, except for the arms. Well, I am going camping for a few days and maybe something will come to me but, for now, I will leave it as is. Thank you for questioning me though. I'm often wrong about things 🙂 Maybe I will end up changing it back!

                      Marsha Ottum Owen

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                      • MOO
                        MOO SVS OG @aska last edited by

                        @aska Maybe the front foot should be turned out a bit though.........hmmm....

                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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