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      A Former User last edited by

      I love this kinda of concept art. I don't know much about your concept, but if she has fire powers I don't think wooden and paper objects out in the open are the greatest idea

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        linhb @Guest last edited by linhb

        @ben-migliore said in asking for opinions:

        I love this kinda of concept art. I don't know much about your concept, but if she has fire powers I don't think wooden and paper objects out in the open are the greatest idea

        its japan ancient world 😞 and its not paper its frabic (thanks )

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          A Former User @linhb last edited by

          @linhb sorry, when I said paper I meant the books. I love the art, I'm just not totally aware of the concept. Sorry

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            linhb @Guest last edited by

            @ben-migliore said in asking for opinions:

            @linhb sorry, when I said paper I meant the books. I love the art, I'm just not totally aware of the concept. Sorry

            in 1980s she doesnt have fire power, only in the samurai she has fire power 😃

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              TessaW last edited by

              Not sure what critique to give, sorry. I think they look great!

              Website: www.tessawrathall.com

              Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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                MOO SVS OG @linhb last edited by

                @linhb Wow! These look really good. I am working on perspective a bit and these are really nice. Hope to be able to so that someday 🙂

                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                  linhb last edited by

                  @linhb said in asking for opinions:

                  in 1980s she doesnt have fire power, only in the samurai she has fire power 😃

                  thanks guys, still wanna add more stuff relate to fire in samurai room, and more stuff relate to angry with criminals in 1980s room 😃 any suggestions ?

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                    lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                    fantastic perspective!

                    Lisa Rush
                    www.lisarushgallery.com
                    www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
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                      WithLinesOfInk @linhb last edited by

                      @linhb said in asking for opinions:

                      still wanna add more stuff relate to fire in samurai room, and more stuff relate to angry with criminals in 1980s room

                      I love these kinds of brainstorming sessions. Ok, here are just a bunch of ideas!

                      Samurai Room:
                      -stacks of wood/sticks
                      -Small brazier with coals
                      -Water sources for accidental fires
                      -incense
                      -A target practice of some sort?
                      -I love the paper/fabric lanterns, and the paper screens, and they really sell the era and location but I agree with @Ben-Migliore that is counteracts the fire power idea. Maybe mix in some metal, carved wood or leather? Just so everything doesn't seem so fragile? And some scorchmarks- like she has nightmares and sometimes accidentally throws fire at the wall. If not, then maybe a way to show she's had to repair or replace some of those things sometimes?

                      80's room, criminal-related
                      -Stuffed animals/posters/books of 80's crime shows- in the US I'd think of Where In the World is carmen Sandiego?, Ghostwriter, Darkwing Duck, Nancy Drew, The Hardy Boys, Rescue rangers...
                      -Punching bag
                      -Justice scales?
                      -Sleuthing tools: magnifying glass, atlases/maps, nopebooks and clipboards, practice/costume police badge?

                      Excellent quality drawings!

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                      https://www.instagram.com/withlinesofink/
                      http://lauraslatersketches.tumblr.com/

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                        linhb @WithLinesOfInk last edited by

                        @withlinesofink
                        oh ok 😃 thanks man

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                          MeiLiDesigns @linhb last edited by

                          @linhb That looks great! Did you hand draw this or use a program?

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