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      linhb last edited by linhb

      they are 2 rooms of my project. The 2 rooms of my main character in 2 worlds.
      -in 1980s world she is just a normal person, she always angry with criminals
      -in samurai world she has fire power
      0_1499272642015_1980s.jpg
      1_1499272340027_samurai.jpg

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        A Former User last edited by

        I love this kinda of concept art. I don't know much about your concept, but if she has fire powers I don't think wooden and paper objects out in the open are the greatest idea

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          linhb @Guest last edited by linhb

          @ben-migliore said in asking for opinions:

          I love this kinda of concept art. I don't know much about your concept, but if she has fire powers I don't think wooden and paper objects out in the open are the greatest idea

          its japan ancient world 😞 and its not paper its frabic (thanks )

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            A Former User @linhb last edited by

            @linhb sorry, when I said paper I meant the books. I love the art, I'm just not totally aware of the concept. Sorry

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              linhb @Guest last edited by

              @ben-migliore said in asking for opinions:

              @linhb sorry, when I said paper I meant the books. I love the art, I'm just not totally aware of the concept. Sorry

              in 1980s she doesnt have fire power, only in the samurai she has fire power 😃

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                TessaW last edited by

                Not sure what critique to give, sorry. I think they look great!

                Website: www.tessawrathall.com

                Instagram: www.instagram.com/tessawrathall_art/

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                  MOO SVS OG @linhb last edited by

                  @linhb Wow! These look really good. I am working on perspective a bit and these are really nice. Hope to be able to so that someday 🙂

                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                    linhb last edited by

                    @linhb said in asking for opinions:

                    in 1980s she doesnt have fire power, only in the samurai she has fire power 😃

                    thanks guys, still wanna add more stuff relate to fire in samurai room, and more stuff relate to angry with criminals in 1980s room 😃 any suggestions ?

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                      lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

                      fantastic perspective!

                      Lisa Rush
                      www.lisarushgallery.com
                      www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
                      www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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                        WithLinesOfInk @linhb last edited by

                        @linhb said in asking for opinions:

                        still wanna add more stuff relate to fire in samurai room, and more stuff relate to angry with criminals in 1980s room

                        I love these kinds of brainstorming sessions. Ok, here are just a bunch of ideas!

                        Samurai Room:
                        -stacks of wood/sticks
                        -Small brazier with coals
                        -Water sources for accidental fires
                        -incense
                        -A target practice of some sort?
                        -I love the paper/fabric lanterns, and the paper screens, and they really sell the era and location but I agree with @Ben-Migliore that is counteracts the fire power idea. Maybe mix in some metal, carved wood or leather? Just so everything doesn't seem so fragile? And some scorchmarks- like she has nightmares and sometimes accidentally throws fire at the wall. If not, then maybe a way to show she's had to repair or replace some of those things sometimes?

                        80's room, criminal-related
                        -Stuffed animals/posters/books of 80's crime shows- in the US I'd think of Where In the World is carmen Sandiego?, Ghostwriter, Darkwing Duck, Nancy Drew, The Hardy Boys, Rescue rangers...
                        -Punching bag
                        -Justice scales?
                        -Sleuthing tools: magnifying glass, atlases/maps, nopebooks and clipboards, practice/costume police badge?

                        Excellent quality drawings!

                        http://Www.lauraslaterillustrations.com
                        https://www.instagram.com/withlinesofink/
                        http://lauraslatersketches.tumblr.com/

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                          linhb @WithLinesOfInk last edited by

                          @withlinesofink
                          oh ok 😃 thanks man

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                            MeiLiDesigns @linhb last edited by

                            @linhb That looks great! Did you hand draw this or use a program?

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