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    • bnewman
      bnewman @Dennis Spaans last edited by

      @dennis-spaans This is looking really good! Is that a bra about to land on his head?! Looking forward to seeing this develop.

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      • Dennis Spaans
        Dennis Spaans @bnewman last edited by

        @bnewman lol that is indeed a bra ;). I want the crowd to be absolutely frantic, like the Beatle Mania (or now Bieber Mania) :). Its fun to draw!

        Dennis Spaans
        Website: dscomics.nl
        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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        • evilrobot
          evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

          Your line work looks fantastic. Nice job.

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          • TessaW
            TessaW last edited by

            This is turning out great. I would suggest turning one of those guys into a woman. I find it a little distracting to just have one woman in there. Seems more natural to have a mix of genders for a crowd like this, unless there's a specific reason to have it be almost all males. If this isn't going to be colored, I would also make sure it's clear that that is indeed a bra as opposed to glasses. A pattern or some lace or something.

            Good progress. I'll be looking forward to the finished piece!

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              smithdraws last edited by

              Fun concept, and your nickname is now, " Wild Bill." 😋

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              • Dennis Spaans
                Dennis Spaans @TessaW last edited by Dennis Spaans

                @evilrobot Thanks!

                @tessw I noticed it myself as well haha, there is no specific reason on why there arent a lot of women.. The background will have more women in it. The pattern idea is good, I will use that, but I will color it anyway :). I';m tweaking it all over 🙂 . the desk will also have flowers, gifts and stuff like that.

                @smithdraws haha thanks!

                Dennis Spaans
                Website: dscomics.nl
                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                • Sara Glennon
                  Sara Glennon last edited by

                  I really like this concept and your drawing is coming out great! My only suggestion would be to leave off the text of 'independent artist'. Your visual speaks to lots of people, but adding that kind of niche detail to the 'dream' might block them out again.

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                  • Dennis Spaans
                    Dennis Spaans @Sara Glennon last edited by

                    @sara-glennon Good tip, and you're right, I'll leave that out :). Thanks!

                    Dennis Spaans
                    Website: dscomics.nl
                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                    • Dennis Spaans
                      Dennis Spaans last edited by Dennis Spaans

                      The background crowd is ready. Sometimes not knowing where the detail ends, but decided on a row per row basis haha. Transformed the forground guy in a woman ;). Added gifts on the table. Hope you like it. Last part is behind Bill: adding security guards and a 'doorman' :). Suggestions and feedback are always welcome!!

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                      Dennis Spaans
                      Website: dscomics.nl
                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                      • TessaW
                        TessaW last edited by

                        You did an amazing job with the crowd. I'm impressed with how detailed it looks, but it's ordered so it doesn't draw too much attention and you can still focus on the foreground. Thumbs up.

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                        • bnewman
                          bnewman last edited by

                          This is incredible! I love the many small details.

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                          • Dennis Spaans
                            Dennis Spaans last edited by Dennis Spaans

                            Well, the line work is done:

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                            and then I added shadows and contrast, that still needs a little tweaking:

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                            Whats left is coloring :)... Hope you guys like it. Comments/Suggestions are always welcome!

                            Dennis Spaans
                            Website: dscomics.nl
                            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                            • DOTTYP
                              DOTTYP last edited by

                              This is amazing, great work

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                              • Dennis Spaans
                                Dennis Spaans last edited by

                                Redid the shadows, following Will Terry's 10 steps of digital painting. Quite please now :). Now colors!

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                                Dennis Spaans
                                Website: dscomics.nl
                                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                                • RHirsch
                                  RHirsch @Dennis Spaans last edited by

                                  @dennis-spaans Yes, I like the values better on this one too. Awesome.

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                                  • Dennis Spaans
                                    Dennis Spaans @RHirsch last edited by

                                    @rhirsch Thanks 😃

                                    Dennis Spaans
                                    Website: dscomics.nl
                                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                                    • Dennis Spaans
                                      Dennis Spaans last edited by

                                      Ok, the colors are done, and Im pretty proud of it. Next step: make it a dream. It will be in contrast to the cold office, so the dream is very warm and cuddly haha. Hope you like it!

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                                      Dennis Spaans
                                      Website: dscomics.nl
                                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                                      • bnewman
                                        bnewman @Dennis Spaans last edited by

                                        @dennis-spaans Love it! Can't wait to see it all put together. Tick tock!!

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                                        • Dennis Spaans
                                          Dennis Spaans last edited by

                                          Done!

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                                          Dennis Spaans
                                          Website: dscomics.nl
                                          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/dscomicsnl/

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                                          • Chip Valecek
                                            Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                                            Turned out great!


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