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    • MOO
      MOO SVS OG last edited by

      Trying to work on these illustrations. The one with the multiple foxes is supposed to be a dream. The other one I still have some things to figure out. A few tips on improvement -things I can do without starting all over again, if possible, appreciated. Thanks!

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      Marsha Ottum Owen

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      • aska
        aska last edited by

        Hi, i like them, esspecialy the first one. However i think i would turn the bunny horrizontally so the dream cloud comes from his head and not ... u know;) but it does look like he is dreaming so good job:)

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        • MOO
          MOO SVS OG @aska last edited by

          @aska ha! Ha! I was trying to make it look like it was coming from around his head but...I see what you mean. Might scrap the whole thing. I don't really feel good about it yet. I should have taken more time to plan things out....not sure. Thanks though! Going to work on a new plan today and see what I end up with.

          Marsha Ottum Owen

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