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    • Rob Smith
      Rob Smith last edited by

      I like your style and your characters. Really expressive.

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      • Madlenn
        Madlenn @thrace7724 last edited by

        O wow thanks everyone! 🙂 I will use your suggestions and post the corrections soon. I also have a villain wizard coming along, so, more to come

        @thrace7724 The novel is Yan Bibiyan (name of the main character). It's from a bulgarian author, so I don't believe its been translated, at least I couldn't find anything on the internet. It's sort of got a similar feel to Coraline, Wizard of oz thing, but with a boy. I just love that kind of stuff :))))

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        • Jordan Peterson
          Jordan Peterson last edited by

          I always have trouble making my little kids look less like 17 year olds, so I can relate to your frustration with drawing little boys. But personally he looks like a 10-12 year boy to me.

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          • Kevin Longueil
            Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by

            I think that for me they are perfect...i like the androgyny of the boy character...any child can identify with him... very charming characters...love the puckish looking creature also

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            • Christina Brown
              Christina Brown last edited by

              Lovely! Your style is beautiful!

              For the boy, I'd give freckles, and yes trim the hair a bit. the curl on the left side is making him (while adorable) look a little more girl-ish.

              Keep making these wonderful works! I'm a fan!

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              • Madlenn
                Madlenn @Jordan Peterson last edited by

                @mbore710 That's good to hear 😃 Also I think we are usually more comfortable drawing our own gender first, and I'm still coming out of that.
                @Kevin-Longueil Thank you, Kevin 🙂
                @Christina-Taylor-Brown Thank you, Cristina. I think you are so very right about the curl, but I am still hoping to find a way to keep the hair and get the boy look. Everything is still pretty much in the concept stage so I hope it will evolve in a better way.

                Here's a little update with some sketches. These are of the bad guy wizard character. In the story he lies a lot, can grow very big or become very small.
                wizard.jpg

                This is a concept drawing I did for the girl character. She has been turned into a raven by the wizard. It's still not what I had in my head, but thought to show it anyway 🙂
                ia.jpg

                I also did a tweak in the first drawing. Redid the tree and played around with placement. Any thought on wheter this is better or worse would be very appreciated 🙂
                meeting.jpg

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                • Christina Brown
                  Christina Brown last edited by

                  Oh my gosh! I love the wizard so much! You have such a way with making those shapes work and come alive! Wonderful!

                  Follow me on Instagram and twitter! @christinabdraws
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                  • Madlenn
                    Madlenn last edited by

                    @Christina-Taylor-Brown Thanks, Cristina! Thats actually a result from the Drawing Villains and Monsters class. It explains a lot :)))

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                    • Jana
                      Jana last edited by

                      @Madlenn
                      I think switching the tree to the other side really improved the harmony of your image (which is gorgeous by the way). You just have to be carefull that the little creature really pops infront of the tree. With his dark legs it should work. For the case that this will be colored at the end, the popping might be even supported by color.
                      Nice Project! It is fun to follow it. 🙂
                      Actually it inspires me a lot also to go back to what I loved to read as a kid and think about some character design. Thanks!

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                      • Steve Young
                        Steve Young last edited by

                        I agree I think swapping over the tree does improve the composition considerably.

                        Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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