latest watercolor assignment. Finally finished!

[Eli]

@Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen This looks great! I love the colors and the mood of the piece.

[MOO]

@eli Thank you!

[DOTTYP]

It is lovely Marsha,and the raindrops were worth the effort

[MOO]

@dottyp Thanks, Dotty

[evilrobot]

Nice work. You've been really improving congrats on the progress. Watercolor is very challenging (at least for me) Looks like you are getting the hang of it.

[Will Terry]

Hi Marsha, I'm wondering if you'd be up for a critique? I see that you are finished and often when people reach this stage they are understandably reluctant to have someone monkeying around with their art. But - if you want me to help I'm here

[Jason Bowen]

@marsha-kay-ottum-owen This is great, my eye was a bit confused at first with the window, I thought it was the outside part of the picture. Still think it's awesome though.

[MOO]

@will-terry I would be honored! True, I am reluctant because I worked really hard on it but I know that I can ALWAYS improve! I have to turn it in tomorrow so I won't be making any changes for the class assignment but, I am open and very grateful to hear what you have to say. There are a few things I think I could work on and I would like to see if any of them are the same as your thoughts too. I know that any time I post on this forum I will almost certainly get some feedback that causes me more work That's what happens when you post among talented artists!

I will be starting a new one this week so maybe I can use your pointers on that one

[MOO]

@jason-bowen Thanks, Jason.

[Will Terry]

@marsha-kay-ottum-owen Awesome attitude! I appreciate that!

[MOO]

@will-terry Thank you! I see what you mean. What a difference! I was using resources and following them exactly instead of considering their position and how it would affect the composition! I always have trouble with perspective but...my teacher actually suggested the background and watched me draw it! I guess he's more concerned with teaching painting techniques in this particular class. I'll post the thumbnails for my next one and get feedback sooner! That table was bothering me a lot and felt wrong. (it's also challenging for me to work on big paper (22 x 30) so much space to fill with big objects I'm used to smaller formats.

[MOO]

@marsha-kay-ottum-owen

Here are a couple of the resources I used.