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    • Naroth Kean
      Naroth Kean last edited by

      @Steve-Young Thanks Steve! here the next character outter-sketch.jpg

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        Shannon Perkins last edited by

        I love that puppy! Such a cute and simplistic design. His little pin-like legs are my favorite. Your Otter drawing is nice, but he doesn't match the style of Puppy. Puppy is very simplified, has lots of big shapes, and is a little funky (in a good way!). Otter on the other hand is much more realistic. I'd say play with his proportions and simplify his design.

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        • Naroth Kean
          Naroth Kean last edited by

          @Shannon-Perkins Thanks Shannon for the comment, yes I thought it was kind of too realistic as well due to the body structure, I redesign him this way instead and hope it matches better.outter-sketch2.jpg

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          • Sarah LuAnn
            Sarah LuAnn SVS OG last edited by

            The new otter matches the puppy much better. Fun!

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              Shannon Perkins last edited by

              Much better!

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              • Naroth Kean
                Naroth Kean last edited by Naroth Kean

                Thank you for the help 😃outter-sketch2.jpg

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                • Rich Green
                  Rich Green SVS OG last edited by

                  These are really cute characters! I like the updated otter much better with the puppy!

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                  • Lynn Larson
                    Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                    A puppy and an otter??!? Cuteness explosion! hehe they are both adorable, even when they are sad

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                    • Naroth Kean
                      Naroth Kean last edited by Naroth Kean

                      @Rich-Green @Lynn-Larson, thank you! I really like dogs and otters, otters are like water dogs to me XD, Here my color study of these two. all-color-studies.jpg

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                      • Rob Smith
                        Rob Smith last edited by

                        Two thumbs up for your color study. I like your choices.

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                        • Naroth Kean
                          Naroth Kean last edited by

                          @Rob-Smith Thank you Rob!

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                          • Steve Young
                            Steve Young last edited by

                            Your pictures are so cute!

                            Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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                              A Former User last edited by

                              Wow, love these! Alot

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                              • Naroth Kean
                                Naroth Kean last edited by

                                @Steve-Young @daiolupo Thank you so much for the kind comment. Here my spread test. I used to have left one as a circle then I realized that they were competing with each other too much so I changed left spread to square instead. spread-testing.jpg

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                                • Steve Young
                                  Steve Young last edited by

                                  They are so good, they feel like they are done traditionally, well done.

                                  Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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                                  • Lynn Larson
                                    Lynn Larson SVS OG @Naroth Kean last edited by

                                    @Naroth-Kean Beautiful! the puppy running on the beach is wonderful! Your colors flow so lovely together

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                                    • Thrace
                                      Thrace last edited by

                                      Really well done Naroth, these are beautiful and I love the colors! I want to buy the book when you finish!!

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                                      • Rob Smith
                                        Rob Smith last edited by

                                        These look good and feel traditionally done. I've got to go back and look at your tutorial!!

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                                        • Rich Green
                                          Rich Green SVS OG last edited by

                                          Love the colors and the feeling like we are one of the birds looking down over the little beach town!

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                                          • Naroth Kean
                                            Naroth Kean last edited by Naroth Kean

                                            Aww thanks for all complements guys I really appreciate it. I really need to find an editor to help with editing my text once i'm done with all of these.
                                            I think this is what I want to call the story
                                            "Buddy and Olly" or "The return of the shell necklace"
                                            Spread testing with unedited textspread-testing.jpg5_Going-home.jpg

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