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    • Naroth Kean
      Naroth Kean last edited by

      love these! the only think I would suggest is to balance out the detail. I would give more detail to the first image like her hair. I really love second image!!! haha love female rooster/chicken warrior.

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      • Flabiano
        Flabiano last edited by

        Great work.

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        • Jiří Kůs
          Jiří Kůs @Naroth Kean last edited by

          @Naroth-Kean I dont really know where would I put that details in her hair. You mean like adding some shadow to it?

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          • Rob Smith
            Rob Smith last edited by

            These are great! Maybe a little more detail in the first character's hair would add to the image?

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            • Jiří Kůs
              Jiří Kůs last edited by

              @rob-smith @Naroth-Kean Oh maan, I just dont know what is up with the hair 😃 Can somebody draw over?
              Also,
              day 2.5 ...#sketch_dailies wanted me to draw Cthulhu..so I had to 😃
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              • Jiří Kůs
                Jiří Kůs last edited by

                Day3
                Followup to rooster rider, ...anatomy wrong, perspevtibe wrong..damn

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                • Lynn Larson
                  Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                  i like it! i want to draw wrong like you do hehe

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                  • Jiří Kůs
                    Jiří Kůs last edited by

                    Day 4 - I call this "Bulbulea Vulgaris" and it is redraw from a drawing 4 years old...aaand it is not really better, but it took much less time 🙂 I guess I did not improve when it comes to drawing trees. original drawing: http://terrmith.deviantart.com/art/Bulbulea-Vulgaris-252601163

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                    • Naroth Kean
                      Naroth Kean last edited by

                      yes some shadow or line work detail would be nice or even fill her hair with what you did to the second image. Here I drew over a bit Untitled-1.jpg

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                      • Jiří Kůs
                        Jiří Kůs @Naroth Kean last edited by

                        @Naroth-Kean Thanks!

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                        • Jiří Kůs
                          Jiří Kůs last edited by

                          Day 5 - Mr. Ostrich got insanely rich after invention of the airplane.

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                          • Lynn Larson
                            Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

                            Traded the aviator hat for a top hat...niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiice hehehehe

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                              Nille Horgen last edited by

                              Hi! I have not read all the comments so i am not sure it has been said already. First of all i love you imagination, and the variations in all the drawings. About the "critique" it seems like you are having the same problem as me, with the proportions of the body. And drawing feet, hands aand volume in theese areas. Trying to work on it myself with forcing myself to study some anatomy :S good luck on inktober! And looking forward to seing more of your work.

                              Love nille

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                              • Paulina Orellana
                                Paulina Orellana last edited by

                                wow, i like the girls, the animals are so lovely, they had a lot personality

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                                • Jiří Kůs
                                  Jiří Kůs @Nille Horgen last edited by

                                  @Nille-Horgen Yeah, anatomy is endless struggle. I go to figure drawing classes, I practiced drawing a hand whole summer..adn still suck at it 😃 Probably less than a year ago, but still make mistakes.. and there is always that little voice telling me "put her hand behind her back, screw the hands!"

                                  Anyway

                                  Day 6 - Man in black... and pink
                                  Tried ink wash...failed... have to learn how to use that 🙂 Reflection on that gun was also fixed so many times it turned black 😃
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                                    Nille Horgen last edited by

                                    Hehehe so agree on the hand on the back. So attempting!

                                    Love Nille

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                                    • Jiří Kůs
                                      Jiří Kůs last edited by

                                      Day 7 - Clint Eastwizard
                                      ..well there is not much likeness, but thats what I was going for 🙂
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                                      • Steve Young
                                        Steve Young last edited by

                                        Nice going keep it up!

                                        Never give up, always push yourself two steps further than you believe you can go.

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                                        • Jiří Kůs
                                          Jiří Kůs last edited by

                                          Day 8 - battlemage blackmetal fan
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                                          • Ben J Hutchison
                                            Ben J Hutchison last edited by

                                            love the spike slippers.

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