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    • MOO
      MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

      Okay, I redid it ONE more time. Question: Should I put the cow in again or is it a distraction from moving the story forward? Thank you.

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      I did this one this afternoon. Catching up. Need to be more careful though.

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      Marsha Ottum Owen

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      • MOO
        MOO SVS OG last edited by

        Here's my work for today. That's nine chickens!
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        Marsha Ottum Owen

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        • MOO
          MOO SVS OG last edited by

          My work today. Not going to work out I don't think. This one will take m esome more time as I am trying to reposition it.........Oh well....pushing on.

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          Marsha Ottum Owen

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          • K
            Kat SVS OG last edited by

            It's looking like a cute story! Keep going, I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with all these chickens 🙂

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            • MOO
              MOO SVS OG @Kat last edited by

              @kat Thanks 🙂 Still plugging away 🙂

              Marsha Ottum Owen

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              • MOO
                MOO SVS OG last edited by

                Finished this today.

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                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                • MOO
                  MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                  I did make some progress today with sketching.

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                  The second image didn't post.....the sketches of Uncle Carl running. It's okay. I made a decision on that and will start inking soon.

                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                  • MOO
                    MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by

                    @marsha-kay-ottum-owen I might redo this one......

                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                    • MOO
                      MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                      Here are my two inkings for today. I'm starting to feel like these aren't that great again but I'm pushing ahead. Not sure if I should or not but....the cow is giving me some trouble again too....I hope I'm not giving in on this too soon. I believe someone else could do so much better but, it's my project so I am going to do it anyway. I am going to work on figure drawing and review the class on positioning characters again and also watch the visualizing perspective class. I'm a little embarrassed by these.....

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                      One of them is not posting. I'll try again later.

                      Marsha Ottum Owen

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                      • MOO
                        MOO SVS OG last edited by

                        This is the other one. Just being accountable.

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                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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                        • MOO
                          MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                          Guess what! I actually finished my cow. Not perfect, but it will do fo rme. Much better than it was. Sorry for the fuzzy picture.

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                          And this is the last illustration of the book! Now, I need to do the cover and a few touch ups, etc.

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                          Then I will prepare to paint a lot. Whew! Still a lot to do but I am going to say this part is done.

                          Woohoo!

                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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                          • Eli
                            Eli last edited by

                            wow! Great job! That's huge, being done with the drawing stage. They look great--especially this last one. I LOVE that cow's expression!

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                            • MOO
                              MOO SVS OG @Eli last edited by

                              @eli Thank you. It's been a challenge but I hope ot move forward and improve my skills with the next project and hopefully get to the end a little quicker 🙂

                              Marsha Ottum Owen

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                              • MOO
                                MOO SVS OG @MOO last edited by

                                @marsha-kay-ottum-owen I need to redo this one because I messed up the ink and the white stuff I used to fix it runs with the paint 😞 Oh well. After that, the cover.)

                                Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                • MOO
                                  MOO SVS OG last edited by

                                  Hello all! Looks like I might be moving before we thought. I might have to wait to paint until then...we'll see. I'm a little scared to get started 🙂 Oh well...onward!!!

                                  Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                  • MOO
                                    MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                                    Just to update...I have not started painting though most of the illustrations are done. I have one to do for the end pages. I have been downsizing my house to move into a fifth wheel and sell our house, etc. and I have been feeling pretty stressed so, I am holding off on painting right now so I don't have a heart attack 🙂 Either I'll rush or I just won't be able to focus well so....I will have to extend my goal of June to later in the year. Looking forward to being able to relax and watch videos and paint, etc. and get back on track. Just want you to know I haven't given up!

                                    Marsha Ottum Owen

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                                    • MOO
                                      MOO SVS OG last edited by

                                      Thinking of this image for the las page facing the end page.

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                                      Marsha Ottum Owen

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