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    • Andy Gray
      Andy Gray last edited by

      watercolour complete...one more phase...
      0_1517345728628_wip op9.JPG

      Helping people tell their stories, and discover their own.
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      • Jason Bowen
        Jason Bowen SVS OG @Andy Gray last edited by Jason Bowen

        @andy-gray Hey I really like your picture would it be ok if I borrow it to practice lighting on it? I don't mind showing you what I do... It is something I enjoy and am trying to get better at. I'm not as good at design as you though so my pictures that I practice on are not as fun as yours could be. Don't worry if not though. 🙂

        https://www.instagram.com/jasonbowenoils/

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        • Andy Gray
          Andy Gray @Jason Bowen last edited by

          @jason-bowen go for it! recolour if you want to. line work is all there

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          • Andy Gray
            Andy Gray @Jason Bowen last edited by

            @jason-bowen
            finished piece is on the fearless thread. but in case you missed it, here it is again. needed pencilling over to deepen the shading.
            0_1517416355776_1517356557128-fearless-final-resized.jpg

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            • Jason Bowen
              Jason Bowen SVS OG @Andy Gray last edited by

              @andy-gray Thanks very much! 🙂

              https://www.instagram.com/jasonbowenoils/

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              • Jason Bowen
                Jason Bowen SVS OG last edited by

                0_1517433294055_fearless final lighting test.jpg

                Thanks for letting me play with lighting on your painting @Andy-Gray . This is what I cam up with 🙂

                https://www.instagram.com/jasonbowenoils/

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                • Andy Gray
                  Andy Gray @Jason Bowen last edited by

                  @jason-bowen Ok... happy with the idea. But back into your court, how about trying some of these things
                  keep the textures that I had already established (an important part of my work) - so often i see work that is photoshopped or digital. so can you do this wihtout it having that photoshop look?
                  Love the whole spooky thing going on, but it's lost some of the detail in the faces and characters. Pushing and pulling the values more will for HDR might bring them back. so go in and create more detailed lighting.
                  The contrasting colour of orange glow works really well, but there isn't any on the pirates now so the picture now seems like two seperate images. See what you can do compositionally to pull it all together. I recommend having a look at some film shots where there are a few different colours going on for lighting scenes.

                  Hope you don't mind the feedback, but you want to play with the lighting ;-). I'd love to see how far you can push the picture but still retain the original. May give me more ideas for the future! (aka steal it back from you hahahaha!)

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                  • Jason Bowen
                    Jason Bowen SVS OG @Andy Gray last edited by

                    @andy-gray thanks for helping me I am happy to get feedback! I need it haha. I understand what you mean. I actually think your original is great. I will have another go at it and see if I can get the look and harmony in the picture... If you get some ideas out of it to it's a bonus 🙂

                    https://www.instagram.com/jasonbowenoils/

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