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    Critiques for a Facebook LIVE in February

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    • Will Terry
      Will Terry @Chip Valecek last edited by

      @chip-valecek Thank you Chip - really appreciate it! These are really fun and I think we can do some great things with them!

      SVS Instructor
      http://willterry.com/

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      • bdyanne
        bdyanne last edited by

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        • rcartwright
          rcartwright last edited by

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          Hi Will hope you can use this

          https://www.scbwi.org/members/richard-cartwright/
          https://www.instagram.com/richardwcartwright/
          https://www.pinterest.ca/richcartwright3/art-of-richard-cartwright/
          https://www.richardwcartwright.ca/

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          • EunJi Jung
            EunJi Jung last edited by EunJi Jung

            I have so many works that need some good advice, but I picked these for now 😃
            It would be so honoured if I get critiqued!

            0_1516164266486_girl-violin-s-signature.jpg
            0_1516164739032_EUNJI_JUNG_SPREAD_ICB3_WK4-label.jpg

            Eunji Jung

            Illustrator | Designer
            eunjijung.com
            instagram.com/foodiecherrypie

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            • Diego_BioSteam
              Diego_BioSteam last edited by Diego_BioSteam

              Cool! Here are two illustrations that I would like some critique if possible. They are not digital, tho.

              The first one was done with the draw 50 things challenge in mind, but I didn't achieve the 50 things. The second one (done after I learned "how to ink" with Jake Parker) is for a story that I am trying to write and illustrate as part of my process of learning and improving. Both are done with watercolour, a bit of acrylic and ink in A3 paper - the second one has gouache on the characters and a bit of white poster colour for the steam vapour.

              0_1516176433894_Zombie Hero - Resized.png

              0_1516176515299_Welcome to the Core - Resized.jpg

              Diego Araujo
              instagram.com/diego_biosteam/

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              • audrey dowling
                audrey dowling last edited by

                Here's mine again 🙂 (bottom right corner is space for a smaller illustration)
                0_1516182627722_Happy Hatch day sketch 3.jpg

                website: https://audreydowling.wordpress.com/
                twitter: https://twitter.com/audreydowling
                facebook: https://www.facebook.com/Audrey-Dowling-Artist-Illustrator-498582176906242/timeline/?ref=bookmarks

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                • Will Terry
                  Will Terry last edited by

                  Thank you guys! I really appreciate your willingness to allow me to use your images...I'll make sure that it's anonymous in the upcoming facebook LIVE broadcast... I can still use a few more!

                  I'll update this thread when I have the date and time of the critique.

                  SVS Instructor
                  http://willterry.com/

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                  • Will Terry
                    Will Terry @audrey dowling last edited by

                    @audrey-dowling I'll get this one in this time Audrey!

                    SVS Instructor
                    http://willterry.com/

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                    • carriecopadraws
                      carriecopadraws SVS OG last edited by

                      Here's mine if you need another entry! I'm happy with it but I know it could be better. I'm worried I over-rendered it. A fresh perspective would help.

                      0_1516222033035_triple-dog-dare-finished-tall.jpg

                      Carrie Copa
                      https://carriecopadraws.com/

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                      • D
                        Dian last edited by

                        Again, thank you Will! 🙂 0_1516274975138_dieren op fiets_dian.jpg

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                        • K
                          kerilynnwilson last edited by kerilynnwilson

                          @Will-Terry
                          Hi all! Im new here, I thought I would give it a shot and submit something from a project I'm working on. Any advice if you use this in your critique would be wonderful!
                          0_1516302045289_Untitled-3.jpg

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                          • audrey dowling
                            audrey dowling @Will Terry last edited by

                            @will-terry thank you Will! I appreciate it 🙂

                            website: https://audreydowling.wordpress.com/
                            twitter: https://twitter.com/audreydowling
                            facebook: https://www.facebook.com/Audrey-Dowling-Artist-Illustrator-498582176906242/timeline/?ref=bookmarks

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                            • beckporter
                              beckporter last edited by

                              I would love some critique if either of these fit with what you're looking for. Can't put my finger on what it is that keeps me from feeling finished with them. ![0_1516393869031_whisperandpoint.jpg](Uploading 100%) 0_1516394051471_cocoaforsanta.jpg

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                              • beckporter
                                beckporter last edited by

                                Oops. Second time's a charm? 🙂
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                                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @EunJi Jung last edited by

                                  @eunji-jung I love your style!!!

                                  Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                  YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                  • beckporter
                                    beckporter @kerilynnwilson last edited by

                                    @kerilynnwilson this is beautiful! Compelling and ethereal. I took a peak at your website and I love your Thicket series. 🙂

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                                    • EunJi Jung
                                      EunJi Jung @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                                      @nyrryl-cadiz Thank you 😃

                                      Eunji Jung

                                      Illustrator | Designer
                                      eunjijung.com
                                      instagram.com/foodiecherrypie

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                                      • K
                                        kerilynnwilson @beckporter last edited by

                                        @beckporter Thank you so much!! You are so kind 🙂 This is a page from a wordless picture book I'm working on. I really appreciate the feedback 🙂

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                                          Alex Diaz last edited by

                                          Hi, I'm new in the forums. I made this piece after watching the Composition class, the How to Draw Everything class and some other classes. It's watercolor but I would love to have you critique this. I know there's so much to improve because frankly it's my first piece trying to actually express a story.
                                          0_1516553569402_TheBestIsYetToCome.png

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                                          • Eli
                                            Eli @Alex Diaz last edited by

                                            @alex-diaz I love this! It's so fun and funny and joyful. Love the facial expressions. Nice work. This would be a great entry for the contest theme this month--"Fearless."

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