Critiques for a Facebook LIVE in February

[bdyanne]

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[rcartwright]

Hi Will hope you can use this

[EunJi Jung]

I have so many works that need some good advice, but I picked these for now
It would be so honoured if I get critiqued!

[Diego_BioSteam]

Cool! Here are two illustrations that I would like some critique if possible. They are not digital, tho.

The first one was done with the draw 50 things challenge in mind, but I didn't achieve the 50 things. The second one (done after I learned "how to ink" with Jake Parker) is for a story that I am trying to write and illustrate as part of my process of learning and improving. Both are done with watercolour, a bit of acrylic and ink in A3 paper - the second one has gouache on the characters and a bit of white poster colour for the steam vapour.

Diego Araujo
instagram.com/diego_biosteam/

[audrey dowling]

Here's mine again (bottom right corner is space for a smaller illustration)

[Will Terry]

Thank you guys! I really appreciate your willingness to allow me to use your images...I'll make sure that it's anonymous in the upcoming facebook LIVE broadcast... I can still use a few more!

I'll update this thread when I have the date and time of the critique.

[Will Terry]

@audrey-dowling I'll get this one in this time Audrey!

[carriecopadraws]

Here's mine if you need another entry! I'm happy with it but I know it could be better. I'm worried I over-rendered it. A fresh perspective would help.

[Dian]

Again, thank you Will!

[kerilynnwilson]

@Will-Terry
Hi all! Im new here, I thought I would give it a shot and submit something from a project I'm working on. Any advice if you use this in your critique would be wonderful!

[audrey dowling]

@will-terry thank you Will! I appreciate it

[beckporter]

I would love some critique if either of these fit with what you're looking for. Can't put my finger on what it is that keeps me from feeling finished with them. 

[beckporter]

Oops. Second time's a charm?

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@eunji-jung I love your style!!!

[beckporter]

@kerilynnwilson this is beautiful! Compelling and ethereal. I took a peak at your website and I love your Thicket series.

[EunJi Jung]

@nyrryl-cadiz Thank you

[kerilynnwilson]

@beckporter Thank you so much!! You are so kind This is a page from a wordless picture book I'm working on. I really appreciate the feedback

[Alex Diaz]

Hi, I'm new in the forums. I made this piece after watching the Composition class, the How to Draw Everything class and some other classes. It's watercolor but I would love to have you critique this. I know there's so much to improve because frankly it's my first piece trying to actually express a story.

[Eli]

@alex-diaz I love this! It's so fun and funny and joyful. Love the facial expressions. Nice work. This would be a great entry for the contest theme this month--"Fearless."

[Alex Diaz]

@eli Thank you! I'll check the contest.