Critiques for a Facebook LIVE in February
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Cool! Here are two illustrations that I would like some critique if possible. They are not digital, tho.
The first one was done with the draw 50 things challenge in mind, but I didn't achieve the 50 things. The second one (done after I learned "how to ink" with Jake Parker) is for a story that I am trying to write and illustrate as part of my process of learning and improving. Both are done with watercolour, a bit of acrylic and ink in A3 paper - the second one has gouache on the characters and a bit of white poster colour for the steam vapour.
Diego Araujo
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Here's mine again
(bottom right corner is space for a smaller illustration)
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Thank you guys! I really appreciate your willingness to allow me to use your images...I'll make sure that it's anonymous in the upcoming facebook LIVE broadcast... I can still use a few more!
I'll update this thread when I have the date and time of the critique.
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@audrey-dowling I'll get this one in this time Audrey!
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Here's mine if you need another entry! I'm happy with it but I know it could be better. I'm worried I over-rendered it. A fresh perspective would help.
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Again, thank you Will!
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@Will-Terry
Hi all! Im new here, I thought I would give it a shot and submit something from a project I'm working on. Any advice if you use this in your critique would be wonderful!
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@will-terry thank you Will! I appreciate it
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I would love some critique if either of these fit with what you're looking for. Can't put my finger on what it is that keeps me from feeling finished with them. 
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Oops. Second time's a charm?
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@eunji-jung I love your style!!!
Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA -
@kerilynnwilson this is beautiful! Compelling and ethereal. I took a peak at your website and I love your Thicket series.
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@nyrryl-cadiz Thank you
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@beckporter Thank you so much!! You are so kind
This is a page from a wordless picture book I'm working on. I really appreciate the feedback -
Hi, I'm new in the forums. I made this piece after watching the Composition class, the How to Draw Everything class and some other classes. It's watercolor but I would love to have you critique this. I know there's so much to improve because frankly it's my first piece trying to actually express a story.
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@alex-diaz I love this! It's so fun and funny and joyful. Love the facial expressions. Nice work. This would be a great entry for the contest theme this month--"Fearless."
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@eli Thank you! I'll check the contest.
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Hi Will!
I've been on SVS binge watching a lot of the classes and trying to apply the principles to my work. I would love to have some critiques for this one. Kind regards!!
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Here's one that I put a lot of effort into, and got very disappointed by the result. I really don't like it, but have no idea where I went wrong
